sorry my scanner broke and i cant seem to make my camera take pictures properly :P

here is a better first pic

eh why is no one commenting?

Dude, you posted the first image at midnight and it's only been 6 hours. No reason to be impatient.
BTW, how much time do you spend on these? It looks like you're rushing them out. While the female figures look okay, though they could use some more polish, the males look almost like stick figures. IMO if you want other people to pay more attention to your images you should start by paying more attention to them yourself.

>>1092
lol you are absolutely right cept for the rushing part. im just a bit excited cozz theyre my first pics. sorry

Well, how long did you spend on them? Each picture I posted in my own thread I spent at least a couple of hours on, in some cases as many as 5. In the instance of the photoshopped picture, I almost don't like to think about how much time I spent on it... It might be around 20 hours. Somehow I have a hard time believing you spent that much time on any of these, and while I definitely think you should keep it up and improve, I've found that a big part of improving is taking the time to do the job right. I bet that if you put some more time into these and maybe tried working from reference images you'd be amazed at how much better they'd look.

i spent 2 hours on each of them and that was non-stop, no breaks, not even toilet breaks lol. but speak to me of where im drawing incorrectly?

Well, I'm not especially good, so take this all with a grain of salt. There's no contour to the male figures- even if they're clothed, you need to consider where his body would be under the fabric. Also, it seems like you're just drawing the shapes which you associate with each object instead of actually thinking about the way each object would appear in real life. It seems like the contours of the female figures' legs in each picture is actually pretty good, but the arms seem much less defined. Don't be afraid to erase the hell out of your picture until you like the way each part looks. I actually really like the concept for the third picture, but it's hard to get past the midget manning the ball machine, or the weird 4 part base for the 'tripod'. His legs seem especially weird, they split as though he's facing towards or away from the viewer but his side is facing the viewer. I also see that you kept coming up with ways to avoid actually drawing the hands, but if you keep just drawing that shit out and then erasing it until it looks right to you you'll eventually get something you like, and over time drawing that sort of thing will become easier and more natural. Hopefully this'll give you some ideas for areas to work on.

>>1100
ack screw you IM A MIDGET? lol jks thanx for the feedback.
arms and hands eh? hmm i guess i cant draw some more with thicker arms. i need to learn how to draw, i suck at drawing, a complete noob at this as you may already have read these are my first pics. do you know of any sites that teach you to draw males and unclothed female characters in questionnable positions? lol that sounds a bit specific but thats what i need :(

>>1101
When you learn about the basic anatomy, you can draw people in every position you want. You don't need a website to copy from, you just need practise and a basic knowledge about proportions.

OMg, I love it ;_; I wished someone would draw such a picture for me some day. But your right, Pelki deserves a gift, she's awesome and cute ^-^ (Hi Pelki, it's Krieg smarming over you here ^-~)

OHMYFUCK. I*LOVE*IT.

Thankyou so much for gifting for me, it makes me a happyhappyPelki. One day I'll have to draw for you also to return the favor, nene? ^^ I love their expressions soooso much, and where you've inflicted the damage. This is EXACTLY the sort of thing that Pelki absolutely adores. Jesusfuck, you draw good penises, too, ohyeh. Mannn I love it, I thankyouthankyouthankyou. So awesome. -Pelki leaps at and clings nuzzlingly. ;0-

Oh pretties, I'll lick around all those tasty impalements and rings, make you allll clean. (:<

>>1060

-Hugs le Krieg, also. :3-

Aww x3 I'm glad you like it hon

ZOMG. I think I love you. This is the most inventive, awesome pic that I have seen in a long while. Please keep on drawing more hot & sexy tortured manthings. Oh my god. <3

and another

I love the idea, could be a lil' more detailed though. Still, hooked! :D

>>1024

Thank you. ^^ My style loves you back. <3

Soule is adorable O_O I really like your artwork, especially his look on the third picture! Flu is great, because amputee always works for me ^-^ I there an chance to read/see your story?

>>1027

Awww, thankyousomuch! ^^ The story, Labyrinthitis' Big Gay Adventure (LBGA) has four chapters so far, but seeming as it's a really long ongoing thing and I'm pretty busy/lazy, I haven't got very far with it and spend far too much time just making characters for it and drawing them. Very sadly, neither Soule nor Flu are there right now, but there is a small ammount of nonsexual guro in Chapter 3/4.

If you're still interested in reading it so far (Or anyone else who wants to read it or just talk), you can contact me at;

ugly_aladdin@yahoo.com

>>1028

...You're from the firepits, aren't you?

>>1021

yep. i also prefer the sketch. <3

OH EHM GEE!!!

I am in-love with you and your art.

Bare my children... <3 please.

-sam

>>1022

<3 i love hooks. <3

Hooks, hooks everywhere... suspended in the air--my favourite hooking style. :3

>>1030

Awwweee, I'm touched that you love me. <3 Although, if anyone's going to be baring children, it'll be you. :3

>>1029

I dwell there sometimes.

>>1031

Awwww thankee. <3 I'm sure Soule-chan would love to be suspended in the air via hooks. He is a raging masochist, afterall. ;0

>>1032

I remembered the pink and white haired character in that sketch from your DA. Sorry, had to ask. :P

>>1033

Pink and white haired character = Labyrinthitis. Main character.

>>1032

Hahaha, yes. That is true.

Oh my my my...

I like it, it looks cool. You may be right about working on it some more but you've got a real good start!

nod A fantastic good start. I'm jealous, I wouldnt even be able to pull off an angle like that at ALL... @@ Heheh. G'luck with the rest!^^