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46284 No. 46284
The story (I'm not sure but seems like I've not seen it on gurochan before even though it is quite old)is quite interesting but still not translated, so I wonder if someone could possibly say what is going on in this story.
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>> No. 46312
Quickly uncensored version.
http://www.filesonic.com/file/4024477225/Exhibit.zip

Pass is: Gur0ch4n
>> No. 46318
bad password
>> No. 46319
The password will work if you do not capitalize the "g" in gur0ch4n. Trial and error is your friend.
>> No. 46354
Don't you think it is worth being translated?
>> No. 46386
please translate it into English version!
>> No. 46389
The details in the drawings are nice but damn have they got some shiney ass hair. The colorist got a bit carried away. lolz.

I had fun guessing at the story, but a real translation would be awesome. The story seems quite intriguing.
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>>46312 No worries. >>46318 Sorry, my bad.
>> No. 46813
Bump for translation!
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>>46389
Shiny ass-hair is a new one for me. (Sorry, had to say it.)
>> No. 46949
Bump
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>> No. 47388
bump, even a guess story would be very much apreciated
>> No. 47409
DOes this artist have any other works? As in short stories like this?
>> No. 47425
http://doujinshi.mugimugi.org/browse/author/469/Oono-Yasuyuki/
>> No. 48193
bump
>> No. 48250
Beautiful
>> No. 48259
EDIT - The page order was off in my original post of the translation, so I deleted that post and have reposted it here.


Here is a rough translation I did. I am up for translating other things,preferable shorter stories. If anyone has a request, hit me up in this thread, or post the link to another thread where you put the pics. 

B1, B2 etc are the boxes and bubbles. I think you can figure it out from here. In addition, the quotes around "stopped" are also in the original. Meant to denote a special kind of stopped, like frozen in time. 

Translation: THE EXHIBITION HALL

PAGE 1
B1: Frozen just as they was when they became these figures...
B2: Stopped, these girls' limbs' cross sections are
B3: Bright red, as if they were just cut off, raised and peeled, the sawed skin, muscle, and bone cross section can be seen

PAGE 2
B1: The cut ends of the blood vessels can be seen like pipes
B2: But blood does not flow
B3: And even if you kiss the stumps, they are cool
B4: The students are stored inside the drawers
B5: If you submit an application, you can check them out

PAGE 3
B1: Um, this one please.
B2: Please have her back by 5:00.
B3: In the exhibiton hall there are private rooms as well.
B4: The checked out girls can be used here.


PAGE 4
B1: In a corner of the school forest
B2: There is a half underground [exhibition hall].

PAGE5
B1: Here numerous students are displayed.
B2: Each girl each girl arms and legs are removed, and the body is displayed
B3: These girls are not dead
B4: Although it cannot be said that they are alive either...

PAGE 6
B1: Here the body is displayed. The arms and legs are removed, and the body is in a base state.
B2: Of course, the genitals are exposed
B3: School uniforms and gym clothes are popular choices
B4: In order to show off the cuts well, the school swimsuit remains wet

PAGE 7
B1: This girl and
B2: This girl and
B3: The most extreme girl...
B4: While looking at the displayed girls, this girl is masturbating

PAGE 8
B1: I want to be cut apart and displayed like those girls too...
B2: I want to be exhibited and be violated by the eyes of others...
B3: I want to see the cross section of my removed arms and legs
B4: I want my immovable limbless body to be fucked...

PAGE 9
B1: If I were displayed in the exhibition hall, would you come and violate me?
B2: Okay
B3: It wouldn't hurt, right?
B4:They say they have magic elixir in the exhibition hall...
B5: They say that using that, the girls displayed there are “stopped”
B6: How will you be cut?
B7: Normally, I guess

PAGE 10
B1: Cut off the two arms at the middle and
B2: At the middle of the thighs too I guess...as short as possible.
B3: How about you get your body torn apart more roughly, to mess it up more?
B4: But I want my body to be able to be seen properly, you know?
B5: In order to be considered for exhibition in the exhibition hall,
B6: One must be examined.

PAGE 11
B1:Well then,
B2: Please display your pussy for us
B3: In the small hall of the exhibition hall, the entire body is examined.
B4: Good
B5:Your body
B6: Will be accepted to be displayed in the exhibition hall.

PAGE 12
B1: The treatment for her display is performed by her classmates
B2: Well then,
B3: From here we will “stop” your body
B4: Using the magic contained here
B5: Nnh...
B6: *pushing inside*

PAGE 13
B1: With this
B2: Your blood will not flow and you will feel no pain... Your body will be “stopped” in this moment
B3: It's had time to work now
B4: So...
B5: *wound gaping open*
B6-11: *sawing through bone*

PAGE 14
B1: Right arm, complete.
B2-8: *sawing*
B9: The saw's vibrations...
B10-11: *pulling the limb away*
B12: The left arm is also complete. Next, both legs.
B13: My body is gradually disappearing...
B14: It's always tough cutting through the big thigh bone huh
B15-17: *gaping wound, pulling apart*

PAGE 15
B1-5: *Blood slowly pumping out*
B6: Isn't there a little too much blood?
B7: Huh~?
B8: It's over.
B9: Want to take a look?
B10: What do you think?

PAGE 16
B1: It's weird... my body is missing
B2: Ah... *blood drips*
B3: I can't run my fingers through my hair anymore...
B4: The scar from when I fell down when I was little is gone too...even though this is a more extreme wound...

PAGE 17
B1: It's weird... my arms and legs are way over there
B2-END: *blood begins spurting* *screaming*

PAGE 18
B1: The blood is!
B2: This is bad.. It's not stopping!
B3: It hurts! It hurts!
B4: We have to stop the bleeding!
B5: Blood!
B6: Gyaaa!!
B7: Hold on! Hold on!
B8: My arms and legs are gone!

PAGE 19
B1-3: uuuuuuuu uuuuuu!
B4: I don't know why in my procedure my body wasn't “stopped”, but

PAGE 20
B1: Even so I was able to be displayed here.
B2: Aaah...
B3: Please look at my limbless body
B4: Please violate me
>> No. 48285
Ah hell. Page 4 is page 1, but other than that the order is okay. Sorry, I translated these pages in parts rather than beginning to end. :/
>> No. 50352
Now if someone could combine the text with pictures we would get soemthing crazy nice.
>> No. 50575
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Commence dumping of crazy nice…
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I did take a few liberties with the provided translation, which I hope is all right.

http://g.e-hentai.org/g/464316/1ed1be44dd/
>> No. 50691
Stats for 'stopped girls' as a mutation package in the Exalted system:
Creature of Darkness [-4]
Diet (lust) [-2]
Mute [-4]
Quadriplegic (paralyzed) [-8]
Enhanced Sense (touch) [1]
Skin/Hair Color (skin is room temperature, clotted wounds don't visibly dry) [1]
Regeneration [4]
Immortal Flesh [6]
Transcendent Desert Creature [6]

Immortal Flesh is from DotFA:Lords of Creation. Transcendent Desert Creature is from MoEP: Infernals, along with the Verdant Emptiness Endowment charm tree which could be used to grant the condition to willing subjects. POV character in the story apparently spent willpower to retain the ability to speak, but balanced the cost by giving up Regeneration, which includes improved clotting.
>> No. 52154
Nice.
>> No. 54004
bump
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