femanon here i recently was playing ocarina of time, i got attacked by redead, it looked like it was raping link, for some reason this got me hot. so i wrote this short thing. will probably write a bit more later on. in this, link is a woman and is adult. link was in the Kakariko well, she had just killed several creatures, when she spotted a way that she hadn't gone down yet. she followed it and found a wall, she noticed that it was climbable, when she reached the top and saw a small iron door, she cautiously entered, inside were 6 coffins, there was a gibdo was standing still, it didn't appear to have noticed her, so she decided to ignore it for now, she didn't fell much like fighting at that moment, she noticed the unlit torches around the room, she had a single deku stick on her so she decided to light up the room "gibdo's hate light" she thought to herself. she lit the stick on the only lit torch and lit an torch, suddenly, a keese flew out and knocked the stick out of her hand, she quickly pulled out her bow and shot the keese. it syuck to the wall on the other side. she smiled to herself, she then looked around for the stick, she then spotted it in the wrong place, it had gone out and had rolled right next to the gibdo, she dicided not to bother with the stick and just use dins fire, she had faught off a load of bats at once before she could do it again, she stepped into the middle of the room and used dins fire. will post moar later, for now i am tired.
Apart from what seems to be your mislabeled content (how is Link actually being a woman anything to do with transgender? Unless he went and actually had a sex change at some point in the story you're writing..) I like this idea. Hope you manage to write some more soon.
1) Who gives a rat's ass what gender you are? We're here to fap, not to chat. Go to /dis/ if you have to discuss how important it is that you're a female that gets off on rape fantasies. 2) Your syntax and grammar are both terrible. Quite a few typos are in this, as well. I know most people in /lit/ are illiterate, but they at least fake it. Using periods instead of commas at the ends of sentences would help as a start. Varying sentences also helps. 3) Actually write a story and not a paragraph. 4) Write something that actually has to do with gurochan. Derp. I know you said something about "redead" but there's nothing in this about the redead so far. So far, this isn't porn, and it's certainly not guro, freakshow, or scat. Thanks. I know nothing about Zelda so I can't really help making the story sound less like a game and more like... you know... a story, but no dice. Read a few novels and try again.
@3 1) i'm used to going on /d/ 2) i am dyslectic so fuck you 3) i posted at 1 o'clock in the morning (live in UK, time difference) so i was very tired. 4) there's nothing wrong with setting the scene. am writing more at the moment.
>>4 Dyslexia has nothing to do with it. I know from personal experience that dyslexics can have near impeccable grammar and spelling if they work really hard. I also know that their creativity allows them to use sentences that are varied in their writing. I was simply trying to say that you need to actually edit your work before posting, and think before you post. Your work might be better received, then. If you would like to get pissy at me for suggesting something that would work in your favor, then by all means do so.
i would just like to point out at this moment to people who don't play zelda, Gibdo's are basically Redeads, they act the same, but instead of looking like zombies, they look like mummies she looked into the crystal that held Dins fire, only one use left. oh well, she could recharge it later on. as she started chanting the words, fire started to seep from it, she slammed it on the ground and a shockwave of fire burst out and flew to every corner of the room. Link got up expecting to have to fight several Keese but as the coffins openned, to her horror, gibdo's came out of all of the coffins. the one that was had alredy been there when she had first entered started walking toward her slowly she looked around to see it, she tried to run, but she couldn't, she couldn't even move, she had heard that they had the ability to immobilise their prey just by looking at them. she had to just sit there and watch as it removed her weapons, by the time it finished, the others had closed in as well, she stood their motionless when suddenly she felt her shoes becoming wet, she tried to look down, but that gaze, she felt the moistness moving up her body, when it reached her chest, she saw that it was a Like-Like, she tried desperately to escape, but the look in it's eyes just removed her ability to do anything. eventually, the mass moved over her head, she tried to move now that she was no longer being effected by the Gibdo's stare, but now she had to deal with the mass of Quicksand like goo, her arms and legs were stuck in the walls of her goopy prison, she then felt something weird happening to her body, she looked down to see the mass moving down her arms, over her body, she tried to scream but before she could move her mouth, a splatter of goo jumped over her mouth stopping her natural reaction to the invasion. the thing was now all over her from the neck down, she started thinking "if i wasn't about to be killed, i might enjoy it" the goo was warm and soft against her skin. suddenly, the slime let go, the slime on her body retreated to the walls, she looked down to see that it had stripped her of her cloths, the wall then came down and seeped into the ground, she was left standing their surrounded by gibdo's, she looked up to see that one of them was now staring her in the eyes, and once again, she was immobilised. then things got worse for her, she then felt the arms and legs of one of the gibdo's wrap around her, then something touched her butt, it rubbed for a second against the cheeks before being forced up her virgin ass, it was increadibly painful, it pumped in and out, getting less painful with each pump of it's hips, she hated every second of it, and hated the fact that she could do nothing about it even more, after what seemed like hours she felt something hot inside her, it pulled out and let go, suddenly the one that was keeping her immobilised started to take off it's head bandages. Link was horrified, she had heard about this before, Gibdo's were supposed to be ancient creatures, their ability to immobilise their prey was because they had bandages around their head, she had heard, that when the bandages were removed, their powers became a lot more powerful, she had no idea what would happen if she looked into the naked eyes of one of the creatures. the head bandage unravelled to reveal the face of what looked like a normal redead. she then noticed she had eye contact, she heard voices in her head, then she felt... good, she was no longer afraid, she could move again, she could run to safety if she wanted, but she didn't, she got on her knee's and 2 gibdo's came beside her, their penis' erect, she grabbed their dicks and shoved one in each ear. she had once heard that Gibdo semen had the ability to control people if ingested, they become sujestable, but if it is ejaculated into the ear, it could make it's way to the brain, if this happened, then the effects of control were perminent, the problem with this was, if the victim was unwilling, then their ear valves would close and make entry of the semen impossible, she knew that if they came, that she would become a plaything for them, but the eyes compelled her to do it, she was rubbing the penis' with all her might, then with a big warm fuzzy feeling in her head, she knew it was done, the 2 gibdo's walked back to where they were standing before, she fell on her back laughing for a second, before she got an order, she got up and walked over to the wrapped gibdo, she then got down, this ones penis was huge, it was brown and looked slightly decayed, she wanted it so badly, she got the order and immediatly gobbled it's penis, it was hard to breath with it so far down her throat, but it tasted so good, she vigorously suckled at it, then with one big spasm, it shot in her mouth, she tried to swallow it, but there was just too much, she spat some of it out, it was green on the floor, she grabbed handfuls and smeared it into her skin, she noticed others closing in, Link knew there was more to be done. to be continued...
lol my friend is dyslectic too and its true they are very creative so it makes up for the spelling and grammer dood.
>>7 yeah, for me, i have this whole story completely planned out in my head, it's the "getting it onto the computer" part that i have a problem with.
Link is a guy. Its that other one with the bandages and shit thats a crossdresser girl.
this chapter will be explained by link herself. "hi everyone, now you read about how i was stupid because i faught against my new masters, but i reckon that it would be a good time to explain how things work now that i work for my new masters. i have to help by satisfying their sexual needs, as well as helping them reproduce, this isn't done the way stupid humans do, there are 2 ways of doing it, 1, we transform humans into re-dead and 2, we transform monsters into re-deads. first, i'll show you what we do to humans." Link was standing with a man who was bound and gagged, both of them were completly naked "here we have a male human that came down here to look for me, well, he will be joining us soon enough, first, we take the mask and strap it to the human." the man struggled as the Re-dead mask is forced onto his face, Link then picked up a jug of Green Liquid. "in here is my masters seed, we take it and we pour some of it in through the holes in the humans mask." he continued to struggle. "now, we give him the looks" behind the human was a small lake of acid that is kept at the bottom of the sewer, she pushed him in, he struggled and was screaming, but the gag muffled his screams, his skin melting away "now we keep him in until his skin turns a decayed brown colour." after a while he finally gave up trying to escape his fate and stopped writhing allowing the acid to work much faster, when he had finally been in long enough, Link picked him up and carried him out of the acid. she lay him on the ground "i am not effected by the acid as i have been altered by my masters, so now, he looks the part, and after i am finished, he will act the part as well." she picked up the jug of green semen and poured some into each ear. "now he will act the part, but he is still, in all funtional respects, human." she grabbed his dick and started rubbing, then she started to suck, until he finally came, she spat the white liquid out in her hands. "you see, white, instead of a nice green. in order to change that, we need to milk him dry. to do that, we use this ancient device, created by my kalob masters before they died." she got out a strange device with a long hose on the one side of it. "first, we drain him." she put the hose over the head of his penis and turned it on, the man groaned slightly as he was forced to cum over and over, until he had nothing else to cum. "then we fill him up." Link took the hose off his penis and then poured all of the semen into the acid. she then filled it with the renaining contents of the jug and shoved the hose back on his penis, she then pressed a button and the green cum started to flow into his penis, this was both very painful and yet, a very nice feeling, both at the same time. "the masters seed will modify his body to produce more seed, and he will now basically be a redead." "the other way that we make more re-deads, is by transforming small creatures, i'll show you how it is done." she was standing naked in a room which the back wall was moving as though it were alive. she was surrounded by many other re-dead "for this, we need a small creature like a Skullwalltula, Keese or Stinger, for this exercise, we will use a Stinger that was found in the water of this sewer." she walked over to the living wall at the back, she put stood with her back to it, then, she put her arms into the mass, it engulfed them and stuck fast, so she was now stuck to the wall, then her legs, so now, she had her torso, head upper legs and upper arms out. but her hands and lower arms, as well as her feet and lower legs in it. "now we insert the small creature into the womb of a female." one of the redead picked up the Stinger and shoved it into Links Vagina, it liked the warm and damp, so her womb was a perfect place for it, it violently struggled up her into her womb, it's job was hindered by Links constant orgasming, when it reached her womb, blood was quickly rushing down the inside of her leg. "a stinger has a blade on it's fin, so that hurt, but the next step will help, come and get it boys." one re-dead stepped up to her and shoved it's penis into her welcoming vagina, it came quickly, and pumped at least a gallon of semen into her womb, when it was done, it stepped away. "the master's seed has healing properties to re-dead and their little sluts like me." the next one stepped up and filled her with all of it's seed, it then stepped away. her belly was now bulging fit to burst. "one more, i need more of my masters lovely cum" she said, one last one came inside her but this time, it didn't step away. "this wall has more than one perpose." a small tentacle came out of the wall, the re-dead pulled out just as the tentacle went in, it was much bigger than the re-deads dicks. "this is to make sure that i don't lose any of my masters seed. now we wait for a few days" *several days later* Link was comming constantly, it was time, the tentacle pulled out of her Vagina and all of the Cum gusshed out, Links eyes rolled into the back of her head as the pleasure overwhelmed her. after all of the cum came out, she finally pushed out a little flabby ball of pulsating skin. she stopped to catch her breath. "now *pant pant pant pant* that *pant pant pant pant* is what *pant pant pant pant* became of *pant pant pant pant* the stinger *pant pant pant pant* i now have *pant pant pant pant pant* to feed *pant pant pant pant pant* it." the wall let go of her and she fell to the ground with a thud, 2 re-dead picked her up and then grabbed her tits, they squeezed and fresh green milk came out, they squeezed hard and the milk spurted all over it. suddenly, the ball started to pulsate faster with every ounce of milk, until it suddely started to grow, it grew and grew into a re-dead. Link was then dropped, she rolled onto her back. "lets do that again." don't know if i will make more, maybe, maybe not.
>>7 Yeah, the only thing that pisses me off with being dyslexic is that often times I'll re-read stuff I've written and it looks fine. I boot up a spellchecker and BAM, red lines everywhere. GAH. Drives me up the wall. Plus, in places without spell check (like IMs and IRC) it can make you look like a dumbass. >>9 She said transgender (one gender becoming the other) not cross dressing. As for the story, sorry, didn't read. 3 had a point, you need to improve your grammar and syntax and what-have-you. Dyslexia is not an excuse because, 1) capitalization and punctuation are not affected by it and 2) with effort it can look (almost) like you don't have it.
>>11 i sort of get the opposite of that, i look at a word that is spelt right and i just say to myself "that doesn't look right." once i spent an half an hour trying to find the correct spelling for "okay" but i also get that spell-check thing, then get called an idiot because of it.
ah shit, i wrote kalob instead of Gibdo into >>10 thats what i thought they were called for ages.
i liked that thing you put on overflowingbra (assuming that it is the same horney-helthrow.) your grammar is still that of a 3 year old, but good story.
I'm really enjoying the story. I hope you write more.
>>15 sorry, but i doubt that i'll write any more on this, but if you like it, you should check out my other story "you never know until you try it" i also wrote another one you can find on overflowingbra.com called Cave of Wonder.
alright, i have decided to write more of this sort of thing, i have 2 paths that i can follow, and you get to decide which. A) i do something else with Re-Deads. B) i do something else with Female Link
to help i will write the first part of each of these. A) this is a shota thing with redeads and young link. Link had been trying to traverse the Sewers for hours, he hadn't been able to find the exit, he found a door "alright if this isn't the exit, i'm sleeping down here." he walked in to find a dimly lit room, he closed the door behind him and sighed, "i hate this, i just want to get out." he lay down "thats it, i'm tired, i am going to sleep, and i'll find a way out in the morning." he closed his eyes and went to sleep. vote A) if you want to find out what happens when he wakes up B) this is a thing where female link gets trapped in the Evil realm. Link was fighting Ganon with Zelda. link ran up to the beast and jumped on it's back, she shoved the sword in. Ganon screemed, Zelda quickly opened the gate to the Evil Realm, Link pulled the master sword out and jumped off Ganons back and kicked him hard in the chest forcing him back and into the pull of the portal, Ganon screamed and was sucked in link gave a sigh, she was just walking over to zelda when a tentacle lashed out of the open portal and quickly pulled Link in by her leg, the Portal Closed behind Link. as she passed through the portal, she felt a sting in her leg, she then felt very sleepy, she tried desperately to remain conciousness, but eventually lost the battle and passed out. to find out what happens when she wakes up, vote B)
due to the fact that i am not a shotacon, i have to vote B)
alright then, as parasite king voted after 3 days no responce. i will write more of B) Link awoke to a strange surrounding, this wasn't the ruins of Ganondorf's castle, what happened.... then she remembered, she had been dragged into the evil realm by something, but what, oh well, so long as she had the master sword, evil couldn't touch her, Link reached round her back to unsheathe it only to find that it was gone. "dammit, who knows what could attack her without the master sword to protect her, but she still had other weapons, she got the Biggorons sword out, it was much larger than the Master Sword, and much heavier, it wouldn't repel evil, but it was strong enough to kill most things. she looked around, the Evil Realm was a barren wasteland with only shrivelled plants to decorate it. she looked out at the distance, there were 3 ways she could see that she could go, 1 was an ocean, 1 was a mountainous region, and there was what looked like a jungle in the distance. (writers note, there will 4 different parts of this story, one for each region [ocean, jungle, mountain, desert]. lets start with the jungle) it was odd, the way the part she had entered in looked lifeless, yet about a mile away was a jungle that looked full of life, well, that is the logical way to go, a jungle will have edible plants, plus, the plants in ther jungle would need water, so obviously they had a supply, she started walking, after about an hour of uneventful walking, she reached the thick jungle, she started hacking her way through the tree's and plants, after another hour of hacking she reached what looked like a path, there were plenty of creatures in this jungle all right, she had noticed plenty of small insects, but one she didn't notice was one that slipped down her back, she got to clearing and stopped she stopped for a second to catch her breath, then a creature jumpped out at her, she managed to swing the sword in time to knock it away from her. "damn this bastards heavy" she exclaimed, the creature looked like a wolf, it jumped at her again, this time she stood fast and put the sword through the back of it's throat, she dropped to the ground and, using her feet, managed to push the dead wolf off of her sword, she then felt a sting in her left leg, she slaps it and several seconds later she feels a sting in the right leg, she slaps it again, the sting goes away quickly. she then felt the ground move beneath her feet, she looked behind her to see a hole in the ground where all of the earth seems to be flowing she tries to run, but for some reason she can't, she sticks her sword in the ground, but because of the shifting ground, the sword is pulled across the ground and right up to the edge of the pit before finally sticking completely, the wolf carcass slips past her and down the hole, she looks down the pit to see a writhing pool of what looked like rice, then she noticed that they were actually maggots, the wolf carcass was getting slowly eaten there was already a hole in it's cheek, then it got worse, Link felt a Sting on her hand, she looked at it, there was a small bug on it, suddenly the stinging had went dead and slipped off the sword "SHIT!!!" she yelled, the bug crawled over her to her other hand she could see it crawl over her fingers "no, don't do it, bad idea!" she pleaded to it, but it wasn't listening, it bit her and she lost control of her hand and she slipped, the current carried her into the pit, she was about to hit the writhing pool when suddenly she stopped, suspended in mid-air, she was slightly releaved, but at the same time, confused, but all was made clear as she was lifted out of the pit and, upside down, came face to face with a creature, it was humanoid, and from what could tell, was female as it had breasts, with blue skin, and many tentacles coming out of it's back. "what do you want?" Link asked the creature, the creature smiled as it looked at her. "we want your womb." he said. "we?" she asked, the thought of carrying this demons children wasn't a nice one, and the thought of carrying more than just his was a worse one. suddenly she felt something in her cloths, she looked down (or up from the Demons point of view) to see her cloths writhing she felt something warm enter her panties "hey, stop it." she could see the biggorons sword, it was within reach, but the effects of the insects venom still lumbered her, the warm thing seemed to stroke her virgin pussy lips for a second before plunging in, straight threw her hymen and into her womb, Link screamed, her virginity taken from her by a beast, how could this get worse, then she remembered his words, suddenly 3 more tentacles plunged into her womb, 3 into her ass, she screamed again, until 1 plunged into her mouth and ejaculated some strange sweet liquid. she tried biting, her lower jaw seemed to be no longer under her control, it had relaxed, until the insects venom wore off, she had no choice but to sit there and take it, then she saw something that made her skip a heartbeat, something large was moving down the tentacles, like a lump, she could only guess that they were eggs, how wrong she was, when they reached the end of the tentacles, her stomach seemed to explode more than tripling it's width in the space of a second. her belly now looked like she was at least 7 months pregnant and bulged against her clothing. "those garments looke restricting" said the demon several tentacles tore her cloths from her body, then the some happened to the one in her mouth, a large amount of liquid was deposited in her mouth, she had no choice but to swallow it, but it just kept comming, and for some strange reason, the more she swallowed, the more she wanted, after about 10 minutes, Link could swallow no more, her stomach had grown a bit more, the creature slowly put Link down on the ground and put her ear to Links belly, she could hear the gurgling of her stomach. links eyes had rolled into the back of her head, the liquid she swallowed contained a powerful aphrodisiac she had swallowed so much that she could hardly see straight, she didn't want to admit it, but this was the best feeling ever. "now, you will enjoy the usage of your womb to the fullest" said the demon, the tentacles picked her up and lowered her into the pit of maggots, Link Giggled as the maggots swarmed all over her body, many pushed their way into her vagina and up to her womb many swarmed over her breasts and into them through her nipples, she giggled even more. "yes, yes my babies, come into mummy." she cooed to them. then a maggot infested leg of the wolf bobbed to the surface of the maggot pool, link picked it up, there were maggots crawling in every part of it. her stomach gurgled, she patted her bloated belly "are you hungery? well, mummy has something for you, she lay on her back and inserted the half eaten animal leg in her, her belly bobbled in delight. she slowly drifted to sleep as her babies ate their fill. soon her babies would burst from her Pussy much bigger and ready for to take on the kingdom of Hyrule please review. next part will come soon, if you have any preferances for any of the chapters, please share.
aww. i only joined guro yesterday. i'd have voted for A...
alright princess, this won't be as long as if you had got in b4 Parastite King. but better than nothing isn't it. Young Link woke up and tried to stretch, but he hit his head on something hard "owwww, what is this?" he said he put his hands up and felt something like stone above him, he tried to crawl out from underneath it, but there were walls made of stone, like he was in some kind of stone box, he noticed that it was long, he could crawl further one way than another, he felt fear rush through him, he started banging on the lid of the box "HEY, LET ME OUT!!!" he yelled, the box slowly openned, Link stood up and was about to climb out, but saw in front of him were several Re-Deads, link stopped, looking into their eyes but finding only paralysis in their stares, one of the re-deads walked up to link and pulled his tunic off over his head, revealing links small naked body, link was confused as to what was going on, but became even more confused as he saw that the Re-dead's penis was erect, "what" he thought, he wasn't a girl, what could it want with him. he felt what it wanted as it thrust deep into his ass, link screamed as the massive member almost tore his ass apart, it started pumping in and out of him, after the first few minutes, the unbearable pain started to feel good, link couldn't help but start peeing. link apologised to the zombies, but they took no notice,suddenly, one of them walked into the room with a strange device with a long hose on the one side of it, on the end of the hose was a see-through cup, the re-dead attached it to links groin, it pushed a switch and the thing stared to suck on links small penis, pleasure shot through link like lightning, it was the one of the best feelings that link had ever felt, he didn't want it to stop, suddenly, the re-dead that had been fucking his ass came, it felt like a water balloon had been inflated in his butt, link was wondering what had happened, the Re-Dead pulled out and the green semen gushed out, the re-dead scooped up a bit and shoved it under links nose, it smelt good, "so that is what comes out of their dicks..." he thought he wanted to be able to do that so badly, he heard a voice in his head, it said that he was too young to ejaculate, he asked if their was any way to come now, it said that if he gave himself to the re-deads, he stopped resisting the re-deads, then he could cum for as long as he wanted, link tried with all his might and finally, he openned his mouth "please, make me cum." he said to them, suddenly, link felt something in his dick, then, without warning, green liquid that reminded link of milk spurted out, it just kept going, and going, and when the device to suck no more, the re-dead took the cup off, link was still cumming, his eyes had rolled into the back of his head, they put link back down in the stone box, still cumming. *several days later* link was now swimming in his own semen, he had still not finished cumming, he had filled the box all the way to the top with cum, then more re-deads walked up to him, if they had feelings, then they would have been proud of their endlessly cumming cocksleeve, links penis had grown over the last few days, it was now at least a foot long, another re-dead brought in a girl that had been playing in the well when she was captured, she was at least 17, they stripped her down to her bare skin and then forced links Infinatly jizzing penis into her vagina, she screamed as her belly started to expand, at that moment one of the re-dead shoved their massive dick in links ass again. "i am proud to be a fucksleeve" thought link as he continued to cum. not my best work, but be happy Princess in Disguise.
Thanks Helthrow. That was pretty cool of you to write that for me. *hugs* pardon my 4chan but you are the awesomest writefag ever.
ocean next Link awoke to a strange surrounding, this wasn't the ruins of Ganondorf's castle, what happened.... then she remembered, she had been dragged into the evil realm by something, but what, oh well, so long as she had the master sword, evil couldn't touch her, Link reached round her back to unsheathe it only to find that it was gone. "dammit, who knows what could attack her without the master sword to protect her, but she still had other weapons, she got the Biggorons sword out, it was much larger than the Master Sword, and much heavier, it wouldn't repel evil, but it was strong enough to kill most things. she looked around, the Evil Realm was a barren wasteland with only shrivelled plants to decorate it. she looked out at the distance, there were 3 ways she could see that she could go, 1 was an ocean, 1 was a mountainous region, and there was what looked like a jungle in the distance. she decided to see if she could find anyone at the ocean, after about an hours walk, she walked up to the edge of the water and looked in the water was completly still, not so much as a ripple in the water, link walked along the coast line until she came to a hole in the ground, like a sort of cave, Link looked across the coastline their was nothing for miles around, Link grasped the Biggorons sword tight and jumped in. link landed on something soft, it was suprisingly bright in the cave, considering that there was no way to for the light to get in, she looked around, there was no way back the way she came, the wall was completely smooth, the cave was a large small room with a pool of water, out of the water came 5 small jellyfish, link tried to hit one of them with her sword, but it sent out an electric shock down to her through it, she jumped back and drew her bow, 5 arrows later, she was safe, suddenly, the water started bubbling, link walked up to it and peered in, suddenly, and without warning, a tentacle sucker jumped out of the water and attacked to links face, it dragged her into the water, forcing her to drop the sword, the water travelled through a series of tunnels, it then got to it's des, link was finally let go, she dropped to the ground, and looked up to see the creature that dragged her their, a large mass with tentacles coming out of it, link reached for her sword instinctively, but found nothing "oh shit." suddenly, tentacles lashed out and grabbed her arms and legs, the tentacles took her to the top of the creature and dropped her, as soon as she hit it, she sank through it's skin, her cloths dissolved almost instantly, she felt every crevice of her body being violated, it was cramming it's large frame into links small body, link could feel her senses leaving her, the beast was replacing them all with pleasure, after about an hour, the creature had forced it's way into link, completely possesing her, though her stomach was much larger now, she looked 9 months pregnant, suddenly, 4 jellyfish raised out of the water they quickly latched onto her body, sticking their tendrils in, 1 in each breast, Link came slightly as the jellyfish tentacles entered her nipples, 1 in her vagina and 1 in her ass, she smiled. (will continue this part, but at the moment, i'm really tired and going for sleep.)
ok guys, i'm not happy with this story, should i keep going, or should i do something that i have been playing around in my head for a while?
personally, i think that your first story was the best, go back to re-dead
Go take an English class and relearn writing 101, then come back when you've passed to an acceptable degree.
>>27 you can go to jolly-pirate doughnuts and take a 2 hour shit for all i care.
You do realize there are such a thing as standards right? I'm not talking about a piddly little grammar mistake or something. All you've put out here is a half-baked idea with a lot of crap that sounds like you're still in 5th grade. Theres no plot, the sentences run off like turkeys off a cliff, Random usage of capitalization and judicious use of commas. If you're going to write shit, you write shit that at the very least looks good.
>>29 U MAD?
>>29 fine, you want to write it, go ahead and write it, you don't want to write it, then sit back, shut the hell up and stop being a back seat writer.
All I am saying is that as a writer, you have an obligation not to have a story that is chock full of grammar mistakes and the spelling equivalent to an ten year old.
-does a quick read- ...screw the grammer, give us more! Really, if you're not being paid, you don't have to worry too much about grammer and stuff. I mean what's the worse that could happen? The guy's complaining will stop reading? Their loss. ^^ -goes to read more-
oh, also I hate plot. slows the sexiness of the story. that's why I like this
>>33 >>34 fine, you guys want mindless re-dead rape with little in the way of story, then you shall have what you ask for. this is something short as i am tired. (this is going back to story 1, since people seem to find that the best.) link squealed as another of her re-dead masters came inside her, she was to become her masters new cumbucket, she lay back and let them fill her ass with cum, her belly was now looking like it was carrying a 9th month pregnancy. "yes, more, i need more cum." her eyes had rolled back into her head, as another one unleashed it's load, suddenly, one re-dead brought in the re-deads lunch, a dead civilian, and from the looks of him, he had been dead a while, as the re-dead slumped the mans carcass down, an arm fell off, inside was infested with maggots (writers note: if you hadn't guessed, i have a thing for maggots in hentai.) link looked at it with lust, the writhing mass, she wanted it. "excuse me masters, can i have those maggots?" she asked. one of the re-dead got up and walked over to the severed arm, it picked it up and brought it to her. Link was tied up to the tentacle wall in an upside down position with a butt-plug to make sure none of her masters semen escaped. the Re-dead carefully removed the butt-plug "oh, be careful master, i don't want to lose even a dropplet of your lovely cum." she begged. the re-dead grabbed a handful of maggots from the stump of the severed arm and dropped them one by one into the tank that was Link. it practically took the arm apart to find every Maggot and dropped them into Links ass. when there were no more link sat back, the maggots seemed to be able to survive in the semen, she could fell them swimming around her ass, was finally brought back to an upright position and she rubbed her belly. she smiled and stretched her pussy lips apart "masters, i don't suppose you could fuck me some more, i want to get pregnant for real now." i will expand on this later.
You know, I find very little problems with you. I can understand what you're saying (or trying to) most of the time and in all actual truth some of the things you put up here were better than most others (who use punctuation). Yes, I am a grammer nut myself but I understand that most people don't take to it like others. And personally I hope you ignore these assholes and keep writing stuff up, horney-helthrow. And as a personal request: could you do another thing like in #20 and #22?
>>36 well the bad news is that i can't make another one like >>20 and >>22 because they are 2 completely different things. the good news is that i can write 2 things, 1 like >>20 and 1 like >>22 i'll get on it now
That is kind of what I meant. lol Apologies if you misunderstood my meaning. And: Awesome, I must have said something right! :-D
based after >>22 link had now been in the sewer for a week, his ejaculation had stopped, the voice had told him, he couldn't do it again until he had satisfied his masters. he was currently being used as a cocksleeve for his master when he was found by Impa. Zelda's Sheika bodyguard, she had been sent to find link. "hello ms impa" he said politely. "my god link, what have they done to you?" she yelled. "nothing bad, i want this." suddenly Impa noticed that she was surrounded by Re-Deads. then the master spoke to impa. "if you want this boy, you must fight for him. i suggest a competition, something like a game, he wants to stay, so, we will escort you to the lower levels, if you can get him to the exit without either him getting penetrated, you getting penetrated, or him penetrating one of us, then you may go free, and i will give you his mind back, but, if you fail to do so, then you will join us. deal." suddenly more re-deads walked in. Impa nodded. "good, then let us begin." something to keep you in suspence while i am writing, i don't get much of a chance to do my writing, with work and all, may be a short while before i post the rest of this.
>>39 continued impa and link were in the lower levels of the Sewer. they had been escorted by 6 re-dead, as soon as they left, the 2 of them set off, link had been given part of his mind back, so he didn't simply run back to his master, but enough of his mind had been kept so he was suseptable to the lure of his master. they ran across 2 re-deads, impa quickly dispatched them with a swing of her sword. link was suprised she was so fast, but he kept hearing voices, soothing, alluring. he shook his head, impa grabbed his hand and lead him up a ladder, at the top, impa helped link off of the ladder, but was attacked by a skulltula from behind, thee first strike hit struck her between her shouldblades, her cloths were ripped and her bra was broken, her breasts fell out, she quickly pulled link up to her level and turned to face it, it stuck at her again, she dodged it's attacks and sliced it in half. link couldn't help but stare at impa's large breasts, she covered her chest with her arms and kept walking. link was still staring even as they walked. "your breasts are lovely." he said at last. "childeren of your age should not say things like that." she replied. they reached a ledge that lead to the exit. "we'll be out of this soon." she was just helping link up onto the ledge when suddenly she felt something warm on her breasts, she looked down to see a pair of decayed hands, she slowly turned round and looked into the eyes of two re-deads. "run link, get out now." she said with what strength remained her, the eyes seemed to drain all of the energy from her. link couldn't help but watch as she was violated. then link heard the voice, the voice of his master. "link, you want to cum, don't you?" said the voice. "yes master." replied link. two re-dead picked her up and ripped off her suit. "if you penetrate her, you may cum for as long as you want. would you like that?" it asked "yes master, i would like that a lot." the re-deads spread her pussy lips apart to reveal her wet pink vagina. links penis erected, becoming at least a foot in length, and violently shoved it into Impa, he came instantly, green ooze started to fill her womb, impa begged link to stop, but he was in his own world now, one of unceasing pleasure, he kept on cuming, in one giant stream, impa's belly started to expand to accommodate the liquid, but soon, it could take no-more and cum started to spray out of her pussy, link pulled out, still cumming, the ooze started to leak out, one of the Re-deads, gave link a plug, he pushed it deep into the shieka to keep it all in her, he climbed onto her engorged belly, it was warm and jiggley, like a waterbed, but he didn't want to sleep, he grabbed her massive breast and shoved his penis between them, impa's begging still falling on deaf ears, he kept one cumming, cumming all over her, he forced it in her mouth, she tried to bite but the eyes, the re-deads eyes prevented her, she was forced to sallow gallons of it, eventually her eyes rolled into the back of her head, link then got another command "yes master, that would be wonderful." link got off of her and openned her vagina, he removed the plug, but before all of his semen could escape, he shoved his entire head in, Impa screamed weakly, he shoved his arms in, then pulled in his legs, he rolled into the foetal position, Link was still cumming even in his new home, he slowly went to sleep and the re-deads decided to have their way with her as well. please rate, ignore any and all spelling and grammer errors
Hehe, awesome. No good comes from deals with re-deads, especially nasty ones like those things. Talk about a one-hit OMGWTF. lmao Thanks helthrow!
Oohhh, love it! Girls getting filled so much and all ^^ I wonder if you got any more good stuff in that head of yours
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sorry for not posting for a while but work has been a bitch. i assume that killer70 was talking about maggots when asking for something like >>20 so here you go, this is a continuation of >>35 and in keeping with a theme, link will narrate it. link was standing next to the acid pool, her belly still sticking out as though pregnant. "well, last time i was here, i showed you how we make re-deads, well, now we have found a new way, during the last story, i had maggots shoved in my ass along with a lot of my masters seed, well, i don't know exactly what happened in there, but they mutated and now they can be used in making re-deads." she walked up to a bound and gagged man. "i found this out when about to try using method 1 (writers note: see >>10 for more details.) i was having fun with him, forcing him to lick me, when the plug keeping my masters seed in my ass slipped out, it went all over his chest along with masters seed, i managed to grab most of them and shove them in a jar to keep them for use later, well, i missed 2, they were making their way to his head, i decided to let them take their coarse, and well... let me show you" she pushed the man to the ground, and a re-dead brought her the jar, she picked out 2 maggots and put them on the mans face, he watched in horror as the maggots crawled into his ears, he writhed about for a few seconds then went limp, his eyes went blank. "i don't know what they do in there, but whatever it is, they act like normal re-deads, these have revolutionised us, i am brewing more as we speak." her belly jiggled. "of coarse, to be more time effective, i am making them in both my womb and my ass, instead of my ass, i also found a great way to make them "function" like re-dead." she grabbed the mans penis and stroked it, suckling it softly until in erected. "i want to say now that i have now perfected keeping my babies in without the use of a plug of sorts." she got on top of him, and shoved his penis in her pussy. her started thrusting and pounding her vagina, her belly jiggled up and down violently. "ahhhhh, at this.... time i want.. slow down i'm trying to explain, my babies are now crawling into his penis as it is inside me, they are converting his juices into masters juices." he climaxed inside her. "thanks, now all we need to do is shove him into the acid lake for a bit to decay his skin, but now, we are able to expand, we can make more re-deads within the space of 5 minutes, granted they won't look like re-deads, but they will act and function like them. we are planning on using them to expand into somewhere as we speak. to be continued, see if you can guess where they will attack. all i can tell you is that there will be a lot of re-dead rape, maggots and assimilation, fans of that stuff will want to read the next part when i release it.
GRAMMAR, YOU FUCK, LEARN SOME. Seriously. This is bad, and you should feel bad.
The people who like this are trolling.
No we're not. We're commenting. Just like every other good sir (or lady) does with the other stories. Perfectly fair.
Hey, just cause you *think* you have the right to say whatever you want doesn't mean you should. Show some respect to your fellow humans or get off our planet.
Well sorry about that horney-helthrow, I read the comments before the actual story. lol I'm really vigilante about what's human you might tell... (if only I knew how to track IP I'd be even worse) Anyway, love where you're going with this and I hope it's longer than what you just posted, a tad or more I don't care. An attack and a lot of everything is going to be awesome.
>>49 Wow. You're a moron. Maybe if this person would learn some grammar and put his work into a more easily-read format, he wouldn't get bad comments. And seriously, who are you to tell other people to get off the planet?? By your own little rules, you shouldn't talk down to them, either. You're like the little kids that put things on Deviant Art or whatever and get all upset when someone says maybe they should try looking up some anatomy to improve their work.
>>50 i have seen enough anatomy in my life to know about it, ok that was a really bad joke but i couldn't help it also, keep up the good work helthrow.
>>50 By my rules those who are rude to other humans aren't human themselves, and thus I live my life and thus I shan't break my rules. And by all accounts we do not tell our children how bad they are when they have gone through the first couple grades of school and either don't know how to write or use proper grammer, or both in my case. I didn't learn how to do either until I was in 6th grade! So telling someone they suck and should not write anymore doesn't help anyone. It just discourages them from learning. I encourage horney-helthrow because I know he (or she, can't remember) will grow as an individual as the stories come along. Now I suggest to those who don't like what is happening here (especially you) to not bother with rude non-instructive comments to go and read something better and not bother even racking your diminutive minds for some words of encouragement, as I have seen time again that you neither have none or just choose to not use it along with the part of your brain dealing with a conscience. FYI: Anyone wishing to personally contact me, either to verbally rape my mind or offer *intelligent* comments on my behavior may take it up with my assistant at: oohburned@yahoo.com.
>>52 I love how you immediately go to the personal attacks. That's MUCH more mature than telling someone to stop writing. Look, the fact is, this is the internet. People are going to say what they're going to say. Get the fuck over it. Also, if the author wasn't prepared to deal with a negative opinion of their work, they shouldn't put it out there for all to see. It's foolish to do so. Again, please continue with the ad hominem attacks. Because you TOTALLY know what's on some anon's conscience because of an offhand response to a poorly-edited story, right? However, I will concede that I was rude to the author, and that is not conducive to helping him (or her) grow as an artist. I did, however, say that Helthrow should do some work on grammar and spelling. This is a legitimate critique of the author's work, believe it or not, and one I will maintain. He's obviously using some sort of word processing program (even if he's just typing in the comment box), and most of those will give guidance regarding spelling and grammar. Hell, even Firefox or Google Chrome will give you a passable spell check. All you have to do is pay attention to it. Not doing so is lazy, and shows a disdain to both the reader and the art form, smutty as the subject may be. Also, the word you're looking for is "wrack". I don't know how one would begin to "rack" one's brain. Yes, I am a grammar Nazi.
sigh, everytime there's a response, I get excited, and then just find its another douche...-crosses fingers-
>>54 i'm afraid that the next part may not be for a bit. work is being a bitch, and i'm going on holiday on the next week, i'll try to post what i have before i go, but i'm making no promises.
it's fine helthrow. We all have lives and unfortuantely, life's mandate seems to be to get in the way XD
>>53 Hm, even my heathen mind can't find fault there. Though I am a firm believer of "do unto the net as you would unto your friends" (totally made that up just now) so I do wish people would truly consider other people even if the other people can't punch their faces in. And I should have used "rack" instead of "racking", that -ing failed me there. So correction now: "...not bother even to rack your diminutive minds..." And where did you learn that "ad hominem" at? That was an interesting search. >>54 Sincerest of apologies! I'm just defending a friend-by-acquaintance. >>55 I'll be waiting. And I'm gonna leave my defense up to #52, so only "thanks for the chapter" from now on.
Ah. I don't think 54 was talking to you, Killer K70. Hah. Anyway, at least you see what I was saying. Again, I probably shouldn't have been such a dick, and gave constructive criticism. Seeing as you aren't just white knighting, but defending a buddy, (I myself would actually tell my buddy what kind of work he was making, but different strokes.) I'll bow out and let you guys alone. I've made my stance known. Helthrow- run a spell check on your work, and get some formatting done, and your work would be tons better. Oh, yeah, you asked about the term ad hominem- the answer is that i read. Excessively. So I imagine I picked up that way.
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alright, i am sorry to say, to all of those that were looking forward to my next installment that carried on from the last one, that there will not be a next one in that series. you see, whilst on holiday, i left a friend to house-sit, i told him he could do what he wanted with the computer, he accidently downloaded a virus, and my old computer is now dead, taking what i had done with it. normally, i would shrug it off and start again on another computer, however, before i went away, i was struggling with writers block, the last time i posted here was the last time i did any real work on it, so anyway, yeah, no invasion of the re-dead. however, to those of you who like my work, if you have any requests as to what to write next, i am open to suggestion. it doesn't have to be Zelda related, but if it is of a series i have never watched/heard of, i will probably turn it down.
zelda, huh? i suppose youre into fantasy rpgs, right? what about some final fantasy for a change? it hasnt to be most recent one, personally i would suggest for ff xii :). sorry for shitty spelling, im writing from my phone right now. p.s.: i like your work a lot, as i prefer story over grammar :)
>>61 i'm afraid that i only actuall played XII when i rented it off LoveFilm for a week, i cannot for the life of me remember any of the characters names, but from what i do remember, i remember a 10 foot tall bunny girl in scanty armour that has a cleevage you could ski down (i appologise for the red dwarf reference), i'm thinking you want something with here, yes?
Well, i would be very pleased if you would make a story based on it, even better if on this particular character, but i wont mind if you decide not to do so. thus, if you are up to make it and you want any suggestions/help, feel free to say so. and thank you :)
>>63 i'll get right on it, i will put a few of my fetishes in it, but do you have any preferences, plz no dick-girl, the idea freaks me out
no, dont worry, i dont want to see any dickgirls too :). i like rather the classic fetishes, mostly tentacle rape. maybe some bondage too :).
You know, that does sound good. Helthrow, if you need any information on FF XII just go to http://finalfantasy.wikia.com/wiki/Final_Fantasy_Wiki That's where I go for all my final fantasy inquiries. Second on the tentacles and bondage. But may I suggest snuff and skullfuck? That would be delicious. lol You don't have to listen to me though. =D
Great idea, killerk70. thanks :)! i second the snuff and skullfuck too.
>>66 >>67 not a fan of snuff and skullfuck, i find it just a tad too odd, i mean, i asked my BF, he said that it would probably be very painful on his dick, considering the sharp edges skulls have.
A piece of sand-paper and little brushing solves the problem. but its your story, so i wont bitch if you decide to not implement it there.
Fran awoke, she had no idea where she was, all she knew was that it was.... warm, she tried to stretch, but she found that she couldn't move, it was dark and hard to see, she tried to remember what had happened, the last thing she could remember, was investigating a cave. she tried desperatly to see, but her eyes hadn't adapted to the lack of light yet. "good day, viera" she heard a voice say. "who are you?" she asked. "does it make a difference, all you know is that i am somewhere close, but what you don't know is that i am so close we are touching." Frans eyes had managed to partially adapt to the dark at this point, she could see something writhing around her, she then noticed that she was suspended in the air, suddenly, a light appeared and she could see, she was suspended in the air by a mass of flesh and tentacles. "i have a little challenge for you..." it said. the Viera looked around, she wasn't really in a position to refuse the challenge. "you are a proud warrior, but how long will you keep that up when you are have your womanhood struck at." a tentacle decended from the ceiling of the dark cave, it looked like an egg laying device. "i will release into your armour, a number of creatures, if you can resist their elure, you may go free." Fran looked at the mass. "what happens if i lose?" she asked. "then you will be my slave for as long as you may live." seeing no other way out of it nodded. the tentacle spit out a number of maggots, into her breast cleevage, they crawled down, some of them started to congregate around her nipples, this quickly forced her into orgasm, she threw her head back, but it didn't stop, the small bugs were now in most parts of her armour, the tentacles let go. "if you give in, simply remove your armour, and no putting your hands inside your armour either, or it is forfeit." it said, all of the ones that hadn't stopped at her nipples wer now on their way to her vagina, she tried to think of anything else, balthier, vaan, even Ashe was better than the maggot like creatures, suddenly, one penetrated her vaginal lips, Fran immediately reached into her panties to stop it, a tentacle lashed out to stop her. "do you remember what i said, no reaching in or you lose." it said, she stood, as time grew on, it started to feel better. almost.... pleasurable. after 10 minutes, at least 6 of the creatures had crawled into her womb, she was feeling hornier and hornier. suddenly, she ripped her armour apart and spread her pussy lips. "i care not for anything anymore, i need something inside me." she said. "on one condition." it replied. "ANYTHING!" she yelled with increased lust. it picked up the lifeless body of a Viera. "she has been dead for the 3 weeks you have been here, her body is completely infested with maggots, if you beg me to take every maggot from her, and shove it in you, then i will do whatever you wish for me to do to you." "yes, do it, i beg you" she yelled without a moments hesitance, hundreds of thin tentacles penetrated every orifice of the viera and retrieved a maggot with each of them, it then shoved them into her ass, Fran came continuously, 2 tentacles attatched themselves to her nipples and started to drain her milk, another tentacle shoved it's way into her womb, it started to lay eggs. "now beg me to fertilise them, and you will feel pleasure unlike anything else." fran's eyes rolled into the back of her head "yes master, please fertilise them." a tentacle forced it's way into her womb along with the egging tentacle and filled ever space in her womb with hot cum. Fran lay back and relaxed, stroking her now enormous belly, from what was described, the fun was only starting.
Ohh, wow, I love almost anything you write helthrow ^^ Hmm, well if i were to request, umm...btw, I could use like a few examples of games or movies or w/e that way we have an easier time guessing. Though in speaking of final fantasy, I kinda want something similar done to Penelo or Rikku. Or maybe like a mind controlled, maggot infested Yuna raping Rikku or something X3 Or perhaps, going back to Zelda, I want something to be done to Ruto.
>>71 a maggot infested Yuna raping Rikku wow, your mind is really messed up, so's mine, will deliver.
Amazing, helthrow! 9 /10! and yes, i second the idea of yuna and rikku and some maggots, i only suggest if you could add lulu too :). im not too fond of large breasts, but lulu always got me :D. p.s.: i think all our minds are messed up XD
yay! someone loves my messed up, hell-bound mind XD and yeah, add lulu!
hahaha yeah XD. what about an egg-laying maggot-deploying marlboro, when it comes to ff? he could put them to sleep with bad breath and then infest them :). any other ideas, anyone? =p
>>75 been done, theres one where a malboro puts tifa into a state of arousal and impregnates her.
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having some trouble with my computer, won't be posting for at least a week (i'm writing this on my wii)
>>78 WHAT! your writing it on your wii? thats just awesome
oh ok, I'll wait
ok, i'm back, sorry about that week, as you know, my old computer got a virus and died when i was on holiday, i got a new one, but last week, it started playing up, so i sent it back on Warranty, so now i can work on that Yuna/Rikku tentacle maggot rape thing you asked for. but it might not be up till next week.
since i haven't posted anything substantial for almost a month, here's a sneak peak at what is to come. i will say now that i haven't played FFX but i did play FFX-2 but for only like an hour, it didn't interest me. so if i say something that contradicts the game, i apologise. oh and i apologise for the crappy grammar Rikku had been called to an old mansion by Yuna, Yuna had said that she got it cheap and was planning on doing it up, she had asked Rikku to come and give her opinion. Rikku opened the door and walked in, she was greeted by Yuna. "Rikku... it's good to see.... you." she said. Rikku noticed that she seemed hesitant. "is something wrong?" she asked. "no.... no... i'm fine, just.... a bit... tired..." she replied. "i'm going to.... have a soak in the jacuzzi... will you join me?" "oh, all right, you have a jacuzzi? this place is great." said Rikku. "oh you have no idea." replied Yuna. you requested this, so what do you think of it so far.
Glad to see you back ^^
oh and don't worry about the game, I doubt there would be much to get wrong XP this is already getting me horny
another apology on my lack of posting, i will make a promise now, this will be up before november. i promise you guys, you've been really supportive even though i have the punctuation and grammar skills of a glass of water, but with all thats going on work wise, i am able to get at my computer about 3 days a week. So yeah, it WILL be out before the end of october, if i have to spend the entire of Halloween at my Computer because of the lack of time at my computer, then so be it, i will spend as long as i can focus on it tonight. as a writer, i am annoyed that i have been neglecting you. again before the end of october.
here we are (everyone is wearing their FFX-2 costumes) Rikku and Yuna walked into a small, sparsely decorated room, the jacuzzi was in the middle. "aww yeah, i haven't had a jacuzzi for ages!!!" said rikku jumping slightly with excitement "oh... it gets... better" replied Yuna, removing her cloths. "wait.... naked jacuzzi? kinky!" replied Rikku. "oh it doesn't.... matter really." replied yuna. "come and have a look inside." she led rikku to the side of the jacuzzi and rikku looked in to see no bottom, just a pit, the smile on yuna's face turned to a sinister smirk as a tentacle lunged out and wrapped around rikku's chest and pulled her in, yuna jumped down after her. Rikku awoke in a dark room, out of the shadows walked yuna, tentacles lunged out and grabbed rikku's arms and legs, rikku faught desperatly, but the creature had her immobile. "Help!" she called to yuna, but yuna simply walked over to her and grinned evilly. "why, i am helping, you are about to undergo a ritual like no other." light appeared in a short distance away from them, relieving what looked like a large cauldron, several tubes were going into the top and out of Rikku's line of sight. "do you want to know whats in it?" asked Yuna, the tentacles lifted her up and over to the side, the contents was white and had an odd smell, foul and putrid, yet Rikku didn't necessarily want it to stop. "this mix needs a few more ingredients, and one of them is you." an uneasy feeling rose through Rikku "another is...." 2 tentacles came out from the darkness, they removed her bra and placed what looked like mechanical suckers on each nipple. "OH WHAT THE HELL!!!!" the suddenly milk started to flow, the feeling sent rikku into orgasm. thats all there is so far, find out the other ingredients later
lol, is this supposed to be a flamewar or a story?
You're such a tease XD posting a little at a time
>>89 just posting what i have, my boss is being a dick, i got no time for story writing, i used to have time, but we're under new management, so new boss, less pay, so i have to work more hours to and have more work.
Anna and David were demon-hunters, David was an 18-year old man with short black hair and had just finished his training, Anna was a busty 29-year old, she wore glasses and had long dark blond hair, she was David's partner, David didn't know much about her, but that would change, this was David's first assignment since he finished his training, they were to take out a nightclub that was being used to bring demons into the world, they entered the nightclub as civilians, Anna was dressed in a tight white shirt and a black mini-skirt, David was dressed in a white Tee-shirt, , they managed to get past the security to the main bar, when their, Anna walked up to the barman. "yeah, I want a headless-demon." she asked. "i'm sorry miss, i don't know that one." he said, she tutted. "well it's very simple." she materialised her Great-axe, and cleaved the barmans head from his shoulders. "sorry, i should have let you get a pen and paper first." a woman screamed and suddenly all of the people were pouring out, David tried to figure out what happened, when the head of the barman rolled to his feet, he looked down to see that his head was now that of an Orc, he looked at Anna. "prepare yourself." he nodded and materialised his sword, a man came in from the entrance, he saw them and yelled for back-up. "INTRUDERS!!!!" he then transformed into a Minotaur, at that point a Lizard-man scurried through the door behind the bar. "you take the bull, i'll take the lizard!" yelled Anna. the Bull-man roared and began to charge, it was strong, but slow, it swung it's head at him, but David was quick to dodge, and with a swing of his blade, lopped the creatures head off. he turned to see Anna imbeading her Axe in the lizards skull, blood spurted out as she brought the blade out. she panted and turned to David. she had a small cut on her arm. "lets get going." they headed out through the door that the lizardman had come through, they followed a small corridor until they came to the fridge door. it was locked. "well, lets just try knocking." with one swing of her mighty Axe, the door was in pieces, they walked in to see a long Victorian looking room, with a door at the other end, was a large snake, Anna and David got ready for a fight, when suddenly, Anna fell to the ground clutching her cut arm, david ran over to her, the Snake lunged at him, he tried to put his sword out to stop it, but it was too late, it bit his arm clean off, blood spurted out, he grabbed his bloody stump and felt an increadible rush of anger, he felt his hand return, but it wasn't his hand, it was red and had spikes all down it, the snake lunged again he grabbed it around the neck with his new arm and then stabbed it through the throat, it writhed around on the floor for a few seconds, and then went limp. he looked over his new arm in amazment, then remembered Anna, he ran over to her. "are you ok." "it was that Lizardman, he managed to cut me with his knife, it was probably poison tipped." she said "do you know anything about this?" he asked. "you are a demon." they heard. they looked at the door that the snake had guarded. there was a hooded man "or at least a half demon." said the man. David rushed at the man with his sword. but he was quick, very quick, by the time David had taken a step, the man had already thrown off his cloak and hood, and had ran behind Anna and had grabbed her. he held a syringe to her throat. "take one more step and i push down." "do it!" Anna said to David. "it's a pitty, i would have liked to have had my way with you" he grabbed one of her large breasts and had a quick feel. "yes, you would have been perfect for me, but i have to leave it to him." he injected her and then disappeared. she was left standing still. David ran over to her. "it's alright, whatever that stuff was, it has cleared up the pain, maybe he was just fucking with us. well, lets see what was in there." she said "are you sure that you are fine?" David asked. "yes! now stop asking." she said. "then is what he said true?" he asked. "i was told that you were a Half Demon, and that you didn't know it." she replied she seemed to be sweating. "they have some explaining to do when we get back." he said. they opened the door and walked in, in there was a wall made of solid flesh, as Anna approach, suddenly several tentacles lashed out and grabbed her around the arms and legs, one other grabbed her Axe and threw it out of her reach, they pulled her in close to the wall, David rushed over in an attempt to stop it, the moment that he came close, they let go. "what the hell?" he asked. "this is one of the ways that the demons bring other demons into the world, they get walls like this to impregnate girls with demons from the other world, obviously, they take orders from the closest demon, or half demon in your case." she said. she seemed to be sweating a lot more. he hadn't noticed before, but her tits were HUGE! wait, what was he thinking, she suddenly felt something on her breast, she looked down to see a lone tentacle stroking her boob. she yanked it off, David snapped out of it and the tentacle retreated. "what the hell are you thi.... oh god it's hot in here" she removed her shirt. "damn, it's still too hot." she removed her skirt. David looked at her. "are you alright?" "yes, this is probably the effect of the stuff that bastard injected into me...." she looked at the fleshy wall. "i just had an idea, you can control those with your mind yes?" "from what i can guess, yeah." he replied. "i have heard that they heal anyone in it, could you tell them to try to impregnate me, then once they heal me, you tell them to let me go without them impregnating me, how about that?" she asked. the sweat coming off of her made her Bra almost see-through "well i suppose... but i don't know enough about it to risk it." "i don't care, i just want to be.... healed." she said slowly and took off her glasses, she through them away, he sighed and then tried to start fantasising about her, tentacles lashed out at her and grabbed her around her arms, legs and her waist, her panties and bra were soon lost among the amount of tentacles crawling over her, after Anna emerged from the tentacles, David could see that there were countless tentacles inside her vagina, her eyes had rolled into the back of her head, and she looked like she was having the time of her life. David told them to let her go, they did so, pulling out of everywhere. Anna dropped to the floor, David ran over to her, she slapped him around the face. "what are you doing?" she asked. "you told me to let you get healed and then pull you out." he said "ok, i have heard that giving birth to demon babies is supposedly the best feeling ever, i wanted to experience it, i knew that you could bring me round afterwards, you know, you being half demon, so, make a girl happy, put me back in. "but what about the higher ups?" he asked. "i told them that i was going out of the country on hunting business, they aren't expecting me back for a month." she pleaded. "you can even kill whatever comes out, demon pregnancies last about a week. you can do what you want to me whilst it's going on." "fine." he said. and ordered the tentacles of fuck her. the tentacles grabbed her and pulled her against the flesh wall, the tentacles started to fill her up, several shoved their way down her throat, David sat back and watched as his partner was violated in every hole, he got really hot watching this, and she said that he could do what he wanted, he walked up to her and grabbed one of her tits, it was warm and soft, he grabbed the other one with his demonic arm, it felt so soft, he licked a nipple, a little bit of milk came out on his tongue, it was delicious, he started to suck gently. he then dropped his trousers and pants, he stood penis erect, it was huge thanks to his demonic powers, the tentacles lowered her down, she licked the shaft, she then started to suck on the head, then the whole thing, she vigorously sucked until he came, she swallowed what she could, but there was too much she spat some out, he was still coming, it was going all over the floor. when he finally stopped, a lot of his semen had gone all over the floor. "be rough with me!" she ordered. "you let it go all over the floor, now clean it up." he said, the tentacles let her get on her hands and knees, she started licking the cum off of the floor, she licked at the floor until suddenly she was lifted and her her arms lefs were suddenly tied to the wall by the tentacles, she then felt the countless tentacles all cum simultaneously, she looked down and saw her belly expand to 3 times the size it was before, she screamed in orgasm, david rubbed her large round belly. "well, you wanted to know what demonic childbirth felt like, you'll know soon. in the mean time, lets have some fun." i posted this on the board a few months ago, no-one seemed to take any notice, i found it whilst going through /lit/, what do you think of it?
i remember this, it was alright.
it's alright, BUT WANT NEXT PART OF FF THING
alright, next part, up before halloween as i promised the orgasm washed over Rikku like a wave, her body spasming trying to arch her back but the tentacles had her held firmly. "Yuna..... what the fuck is going on!" asked Rikku. "oh it's great." replied Yuna "my new master has come to this realm, and now he wants an army to conquer this world, we need to perform the ritual in order to start." a light came on illuminating the entire room, Rikku could see Paine and Lulu in a similar state as her, but they had black leather gag's around their mouth to stop them from talking, all of them around the cauldron. tubes going from their nipples, into the cauldron. Yuna continued "the ritual states 'into the demon's pot; add the milk of the Thief, the Mage and the Warrior." a tentacle with a bag came down from the ceiling and let one of the sides of the bag fall open, Rikku watched with mute horror as Maggots dropped into the cauldron "the servents of the master and....'" tentacles wrapped there way around yuna and started to pump something into her womb. "the Summoner, fertilised with the masters seed." the tentacles carried Yuna and dropped her into the Cauldron, red smoke billowed from the cauldron, it smelt weird, and for some reason made Rikku horny. "come everyone, master wants you to help." tentacles thrust their way into Rikku, Lulu and Paine's wombs, Rikku almost screamed, but as she openned her mouth, a tentacle jammed itself inside, she didn't know what to make of the situation, she knew it was wrong, but it felt so good, heard something, a faint voice telling her to submit, submit? submit to what? submit to the master, to the pleasure, and then, she could feel good for all eternity. no, she thought, it's wrong, but is it wrong to want to feel good? of course not. the tentacle holding rikku placed her in the cauldron with Yuna, the white substance was warm and comfortable. Rikku looked around to see that lulu and Paine were also in, meaning they had come to the same decision, rikku could feel som of the Maggots trying to crawl into he Vagina, at first she tried to push them away, but then the voice told her to relax, that it would feel good. Rikku slid her fingers down her body and openned her vaginal lips, the large maggots could now enter easily, she looked at Yuna, who's belly was now engorged, Yuna stroked it a bit then turned to Rikku. "i am now a vessel for the master's army, but master wants more." "i'll help your master, use my womb to carry the army." said Rikku. "i'll help to, i always wanted to be a mother." said Paine "me too, my baby was painful, but the master's babies will be much more enjoyable." said Lulu. tentacles forced their way into the wombs of the three girls and started to deposite eggs. it felt more amazing than Rikku had imagined. when the wombs could hold no more eggs, a tentacle dropped in front of the girls. "now as a test of your sincerity, you must thrust those into your wombs yourselfs." Rikku, Lulu and Paine grabbed them and started stuffing them into their vagnia's. when the head reached Rikku's womb, it started to shoot cum into it, she lay back and orgasmed with it, she noticed that the other 2 girls were doing the same. "can't wait to feel what it's like when they come out!" said Lulu pulling the still cumming tentacle out of her vagina and sucking on it. "mmmmm, tasty." "oh thanks Yuna, you have great taste in houses." said rikku, rubbing her belly, feeling her master's army grow inside her. what do you think? also, taking requests on what to do next.
thats a good job, keep up the good work.
awesome, write moar plz!!!
oh you updated it awesome you still need to work on grammar though
can i make request? go back to re-dead rape.
My Mod, My Mod, Why Hast Thou Forsaken Me?
>>98 ok, i'll get on it now (i don't like the new stuff i did anyway, i think it's too samey)
erm... bump anyone? bump!
here's a quick one i did (fucking work, they are giving me practically no time off, and i can't complain or i get the sack and i am not going to get another job if i get thrown out of this one.) so yeah, this is set in same universe as first post with female redead slave link 2 Teenaged girls had just reached the bottom of the well. 1 of them had long blond hair, the other had short Ginger hair. this was the 3rd time this week that the blond had been down here this week. "come on, this is by far the best way to spend an evening." said the blond. "i don't know. maybe we should go back." replied the Ginger. "tell you what, you don't have to join in, just stand back and watch, then if you feel like it, you can join in." said the Blond. "now help me into my gear" the blond stripped down to nothing, there were several ropes hanging from the ceiling, all in a row. "they put them out here for us to do this." she said. the ginger helped the blond into bondage gear. she then managed to tie her to the rope hanging from the ceiling, with her arms and legs strung up forcing her belly out. the Ginger ran for cover. after 5 minutes, they heard the moaning of Re-dead coming, the blond was sweating so much, she couldn't see them as she had a blindfold, she also had a gobstopper in her mouth, she was wanting them to do naughty things to her, and they were more than willing to oblige her, the blond squealed as she felt a Re-deads thick member pierce her body, the others gathered around her, the first one came quickly, and then pulled out the next one stepped up and took the first ones place, rythmically pumping her. she muffled something but it was almost impossible to hear, but they understood, one removed the gobstopper and replaced it with it's dick, she seemed more and more satisfied as time grew on. after th 8th Re-dead ejaculated in her face, a naked female stepped forward, she had pointed ears and her belly was swollen as though pregnant. "hello there little girl, are we having fun?" asked Link. the blond nodded without removing the dick from her mouth. "good, you mind if i join in?" the blond shook her head link bent down and started to suck off one of them, she gave hand-jobs to 2 others. they all came in her face at the same time. Link licked the sticky green cum from her face "tell me, do you like the taste of Re-Dead Cum?" she asked. the Blond nodded. the blond girl was suddenly lowered to only inches above the ground. "tell me, would you love to bathe in it?" the Re-dead cock was gone now. "yes i would, miss." she replied. Link stood over her head and pulled something out of her vagina. suddenly a torrent of Green Cum rained down on the girl, link put the stopper back in. "was that good?" she asked. "yes it was, can i have more?" asked the blond. suddenly link heard something. "oh, you brought a friend with you today? come on out of the shadows." she called "don't worry, nothing bad will happen." suddenly, the ginger stepped forward. "so you are her guest, do you want to join in?" she asked, the Ginger was very frightened and shook her head. "oh thats ok, you can just stay here and watch. the ginger calmed down, little did she know that the Smell of the Cum contained an aphrodisiac, soon she was un-able to watch as Link and the Blond were having so much fun. "THATS IT, I WANT THE MOST PLEASURABLE THING EVER!!!!!" She yelled ripping off her panties and jumping on a Re-deads dick. Link looked at her. wow, she'd never seen someone take to the aphrodisiac so strongly before. "well if you want the best feeling ever, then... you should try our speciality." she said "all we need is some tight cloths." the Blond raised her head. "i got a spare one-piece corset in the bag." the ginger threw it on herself "get on your knees." ordered Link. Link stood over the Ginger, she took the plug out of her vagina again. the Cum rained down on her, but this time it was chunky, this was because of the maggots that had been brewing in there, they managed to crawl into the corset through the gap in her cleavage, they wriggled around her suit. the Ginger looked at Link, she still look pregnant. "i.... want what you have" she said. Link nodded and put the girl on her back, she then got down on her knees. "come on my babies, get into your new home." she said, the Maggots in her suit then all ran to her Vagina and faught each other for entrance. "lets seal the deal shall we?" she motioned to a re-dead that shoved it's cock all the way to her womb, it started to Cum Vigorously. after about 2 minutes, the Gingers belly resembled Links. "how about you join us?" asked Link. "well, i don't know..." suddenly, 2 Re-deads shoved their dicks in her ears, they came and then the Ginger's resistance stopped "yeah, that would be great..." she said. "take her to the insemination Chamber, cut the other down, let her leave, she'll bring more of her friends, then we can make an army to conquer this world." said link as they dragged off the Ginger, her still giggling uncontrollably. (there you go PK.)
Heh, well good to see you're still alive. And good to see a classic helthrow theme. ;)
>>103 yes i am proud of that. i assume you want some moar Re-Dead Raep for my next story, so which do you want for it. A- Female Link. B- Young Link.
happy new year. heres something quick, a cross over, Female Link converting Young link into his re-dead bitch state. F-Link walked into the tomb chamber, she openned up one of the tombs and saw young link lying there, a re-dead fucking the young boy in his ass. Young link trying desperatly not to cum. F-Link looked down, she stroked her engorged belly. "take 5, i'll handle him." she said. the Re-dead got out of the coffin. "don't leave, i might need you." she said. she got in the tomb and lay down ontop of the small boy. "so what's wrong little boy?" she asked. the small boy seemed afraid. "do you want to cum?" "get off of me!" he yelled. "ooo, still feisty?" she asked "good." she grabbed the small boys head and forced it to her nipple. "have a drink." she said. he struggled, but the woman was much larger than me "get me the MBCE." she ordered, the re-dead moaned and then shuffled away. "come on, drink from mommy." she said and squeezed her nipple, the young boy got a mouth full of her mutated Milk. he was forced to swallow, he then sucked slightly, the milk was quite addictive, he started to suck furiously. "good little baby. Drink as much as you want." she said. it was hard to get him on around her big belly. the re-dead returned with a bottle "this is the MBCE, the Maggot Bottle of Cum Extraction. do you want me to use it on you?" she asked. the young link let go and grabbed his dick in an attempt to cover it up. "oh, but baby, if you let me do it, i'll let you do something even better than having mommy milk." she said. the young link took his hands away. she shoved his penis in the bottle, the maggots started to swarm around his dick. some even crawled inside. but he refused to cum. "now thats not good." she said. "but drastic times call for drastic measures. she pulled the bottle off, his dick seemed to grow, until it was about a foot and a half long. "good." she lay down and put his dick between her tits and started to rub. "is that good?" she asked. "yes." he gasped. "is this even better?" she asked as she poured the maggots out of the bottle all over her tits. she began to suck on his dick. Young link sat upright. she slid her lips off his dick. "you want to feel this every day?" she asked. "yes..." he gasped. "well then." she poured the maggots on her tits onto his crotch. she got up and lay down with her vagina pointed at him. "come on in" she said. the young boy stuck his dick in there. "no, not like that. you climb in." she said. the maggots now crawling into his dick almost forcing him to orgasm. "but first. cum on me." she ordered. he jumped up and burst all over her tits and face. she licked it off her fingers, then opened her vagina. "now get in there." she ordered. he pushed his head against her vagina and it disapeared inside, then his torso, then his dick, then finally his legs. F-Links belly grew to an enormous size. "you, get in here and make us feel even better." she ordered the re-dead. it crawled on top of her and shoved it's penis inside. she groaned in orgasm. "oh little me, you make me so happy." she said. the young link kicked slightly as the cum and maggots began to change his body.
My computers been acting up. Thanks helthrow, happy new year. I'd say I'm curious about the mutant young link. hehe.
Mmm, i'll take anything, I love everything you write.
well, my BF told me that when we do it, he sometimes pretends that i am Yoruichi from bleach, so next one will have her in it, but i'm not saying any more on it. ;)
this is based on the the Doujin Yoruneko. http://exhentai.org/g/58993/4cc4b99eb2/ but only i never enjoyed the prospect of Rape. so here is a consensual version of it. Yoruichi had found herself a Hollow. but not any normal hollow, this one was notorious for the way in which it pleasured females. yoruichi's crotch itched, she needed something that no man could give her, she had tried. but this creature was not a man. she walked up to it "hello big boy." she said and set down a bag. "they say you like girls." she said. "'they' would be correct." he said. "well it's your lucky day." she replied removing her jacket. the creature picked her up and tentacles began to coil around her smooth brown skin. "you look like you'd rather be fucked like a whore." it said. "Even so, first i'm gonna have some fun with you, i hope you are ready." "i wouldn't have it any other way, you monster." she replied. a tentacle coiled round the piece of Cloth concieling her breasts, they tugged and released her large pair. the creature licked her face. suddenly, a new tentacle appeared in front of her. she was now suspended in the air by the tentacles around her arms. she stared at this new tentacle, it had what looked like a mouth "what is this?" she asked. "this nameless little guy lives in the soul society... it's not really a snake or an eel." replied the Hollow. Yoruichi let out a little squeal as the creature latched onto her breast "it sucks on you like a leech and lives by sucking out soul energy. it also spits out an opiate to keep it's prey from resisting." he said. "you won't find resistance from me." she giggled. "don't suppose you have another one do you?" she asked. suddenly she felt a second one latch onto her other breast. "oh you do..." she said. her body now very sweaty. she let out a cry as a third one latched onto her crotch. she felt a tongue doing some work there. "this is so good." she said. suddenly, the 3 tentacles let go and she was lowered down to her feet. "awww, where you going?" she asked. but then she was bent over and felt the creatures warm hands on her ass. "oh you are good." she said, she then spotted something wriggling in his hand "what are you doing?" she asked. "those creatures from earlier, this is one of it's larvae. it will grow by absorbing the juices of your rectum." he said. "your going to shove it in my ass?" she asked. "if you do, can you get that bag first? it has something of interest in there." she said. the creature picked up her bag and pulled out a bottle of oil. "yes... please rub me with it." the creature pulled her upright and then poured the oil down her, her sweaty body getting even more slippery. "thank you, now put it in." she asked. the creature poured oil over her ass, it then spread her cheeks apart and put the larvae in, Yoruichi threw her head back in pleasure, the creature wriggled and writhed and pushed it's way into her ass, the tentacles let go of her hands and she fell to her hands, the hollow picked up her head, and rubbed his throbbing cock against her face "i have given so much, now it's time to give something back." he said. Yoruichi openned her mouth the hollow shoved his penis in. she smiled and started corresing it with her tongue. she smiled and swallowed as much as she could, but it was so big, with a slimey pop, she felt the tail of the Larvae disappear into her ass. she took his penis out of her mouth. "yes. oh god yes." she cryed. "more." she said. "more... please?" she said. the hollow smiled 3 tentacles shot out and pulled her ass apart, he placed another Larvae on her ass, she could feel the first larvae wriggling through her Rectum, but the second was slipping out, she gabbed it before it could fall to the floor, she then placed it back into her ass. she rolled over to her back and spread her vaginal lips apart. "you want it?" she asked. "looks like it's time for the main dish." the Hollow smiled and shoved his throbbing member in her vagina. she cryed out in joy. "this is better than any man." she called. "you clamp down real nice." he replied. and thrust harder, he kept thrusting until he reached her womb. the eels clamped back down on her tits. "yes... yes, smash my womb, GIVE ME YOUR BABIES!!!" she yelled she felt a warm feeling. "you came didn't you?" she asked. "good." her belly felt nice and warm "i can feel it inside me." she said. the second Larvae went completely inside her "i'm gonna make you pregnant." he said. "oh... please do." she said. he then started thrusting again. (PLZ rate+review)
awesome just read through a load of these and you have talent keep up the good work
so any requests, i'll take anything you post with the exeption of death and dismemberment.
Hmm, well Young Justice came out awhile ago, and I have a soft spot for Miss Martian. Think you can do anything with that? Or Wasp from the Avengers? Or going back to the Link Re Dead thing, start the invasion and assimilate Ruto ^^
i don't see the appeal in the Ruto's, their fish people, thats just nasty. i suppose this falls back to the big question thaat Twilight posed, which is worse: bestiality or necrophilia? as for the other 2... i can't really say that western art turns me on... but i'll see what i can do.
i guess its the blue skin for me. only other thing i can think of is Marion from Shaman King, but she is a lot more obscure as a character.
i haven't watched Shaman King for yonks, and i don't remember anything about her, but i can work with her. hey-hi-ho-and-off-i-go.
she really has no real part in the story line except as a minor villian. But anyone who remembers her remembers her cause she's just sooo cute XD
i started writing this when i first got my new computer, i found and finished it a short while ago, it is based on the Fly-level in Nanocrisis. but don't worry hunter, i'm still working on that Marion thing Reika entered the field, she had been told to kill 100 of the Parasitic flies, they buzzed through the air most of them not paying any real attention to her "this is stupid, 100 isn't going to even make a Dent in them." she said, she ran into the fray firing the machine-gun into the air, "1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, these guys are just too easy." she said. but she hadn't counted on the Zombies, one grabbed her and tried to bite, she shoved him off but didn't notice the Fly swooping in, seeing a helpless potential-hatchery, it grabbed her and shoved it's ovipositor into her. Reika screamed. she tried to do something but the Zombie came back and grabbed her hands, then forced it's dick into her mouth, she was forced to take it all, it felt surprisingly good, but after about 10 minutes, she felt an almighty serge from the both of them, something slipped into her uterus, and cum sprayed into her mouth, there was so much. her cheeks began to expand to make room for the liquid, the zombie forced her to swallow. suprisingly tasty. but zombies aren't the smartest creatures, the moment it let go, Reika grabbed her gun and blew it's head off. "fucking Zombies" but the taste remained. she killed a few more flies, but her mind kept wandering back to the zombie cum, she saw another Zombie shuffling through, Reika had earges, unexplainable earges, she walked over to the Zombie, but instead of shooting it as per her orders, she got on her knees and started to rub it's penis, she took it into her mouth and began to massage it with her tounge, she kept doing it until the zombie deposited the desired semen, she drank it all, but decided not to kill the zombie, there were no more in the area, and in not too long a time, it would be ready to go again "what am i thinking" she asked herself. she continued to kill the flies until she felt something, it was the thing that the fly had put in her uterous she felt it moving "oh no, it wants out..." she keeled over and began to give birth, eventually, she pushed out 4 giant maggots, they began to crawl away, and reika knew that if they got away, they would become 4 new fly parasites, she walked over and tried to step on one, but her maternal insticts told her not to, she tried hard to do it, but couldn't bring herself toshe stood there and wondered what she could do. suddenly, the zombie walked along, it was about to step on the maggot when Reika kicked it over. she had to protect her young, but how? she decided that the best possible way was to carry them herself, she picked the 4 of them up in her hand, but what now? then the thought struck, she placed them in her bra "now you stay there whilst mommy is working." she said to them. they crawled around in there, over her breasts, her nipples... she didn't notice when she was caught by another fly "ooo, looks like your going to have some new brothers and sisters." she said to them. "HEY, GET OVER HERE!" she yelled to the Zombie, it came over and she took a drink of it's semen, another egg went inside. she felt increadible, when the time for them to hatch came, she gritted her teeth, but this time, it felt wonderful, like a continues orgasm, she was in heaven. "oh god yes." she called. the 4 popped out. but this time, one headed for her vagina again "oh you want back in? come on then" she said and pulled her vaginal lips apart. the Maggot jumped in and wriggled it's way to her womb. this was the best feeling yet, she placed the rest in her bra, but this time, instead of hunting more flies to kill, she found to Zombies and started wanking them, she sat there and begged for thier cum. she got a face-full and lapped up every drop. then the fully evolved fly wanted out, she came continuesly as it pushed it's way out, she reached into her bra and pulled out another maggot and with the other hand, she spread her vaginal lips apart it dropped in and made its way to her womb "you know what flies. i give up, take me wherever you want, just so long as i can keep giving birth and keep drinking cum." she said. she took off her armour and her bra, she then peeled off the maggots and placed them into her vagina one by one, she called over the Zombies and they kept pumping her womb full of more cum, her belly swelled and the flies dragged her to the main hatchery, where she lived happily, satisfying zombies and giving birth to more flies than any other.
here you go hunter, part 1. Marion awoke in a mysterious room. she looked around and tried to remember what had happened. unfortunately nothing came to her. she got up and looked around a bit, the door was locked and on a small table was a veil over something, next to the veil was a letter. she took the veil off to reveal 2 needles. next to it was a note. "if you want to escape, then inject these into your nipples." they said. Marion was worried, they were probably date-rape drugs or something. but she had not choice. she pulled her dress straps down and unhooked her bra, he injected the needles into each breast. she felt nice all of a sudden. warm. suddenly, the floor opened and another small table came up. this one had lots of small orbs and another note. she walked over and read the note. "to unlock the door, you must put the key in the lock." it said. "well duh." she said. but there was no key to the lock, suddenly, the wall opened up and what looked like a sink came out, only, this sink was on it's side. she inspected it another note was there. "i'll give you a clue, your belly is the key." it said. she looke down at her stomach, which was hard to do now as her breasts seemed to be getting bigger. "AHHHHHH" she screamed. but then calmed down and inspected herself. this was kinda cool, but then she thought of the note again, he belly was the key, she walked up to is. suddenly, a blue light scanned her stomach "INCORRECT MASS!" it said. she looked at the orbs. another note had appeared. she read it. it was a crude drawing of her pushing them into her vagina. normally that would seem horrific, but for some reason, it sounded like a fun idea to Marion, she pulled her panties down and got the first orb. she pushed it into her vagina, this sent an orgasm through her spine, she pushed another, and another, soon she was stuffing hand-fulls up. when the last one had disappeared, she looked down at her distended belly and stroked it, it felt good. she looked at the side-ways sink. it now had what looked like a skin-tight one-piece suit on, it had a note "wear this" she took off her cloths and managed to squeeze it over her belly. she then stuck her belly in the side-ways sink. it was a snug and perfect fit. the doors lock clicked and Marion went through. this next room was dark. suddenly, she felt something close around her arms and legs and she was hoisted into the air. she noticed that the walls had turned into tentacles. she was now trapped in this room. i'll post more later.
(i apologise for the comedic aura in this. if you like it, i'll write more if you don't, well then i think you can guess what happens then... i come round your house and rape you to death.) "what do you want?" she said "you" it said "me?!" she replied. "i have not had had such a pretty girl in many years. it is time for our mating. but what fun would it be for us to just have our way with you, and when they cry it is so depressing?" it said. Marion felt a rumbling in her belly. "do you feel that? those are the offspring of our servants. you will give birth soon and it will feel better than anything you could possibly imagine" it said. "and then?" she asked. "and then you choose to either stay or go." it said. "simple as that?" she asked "simple as that." it replied. "wow... simple." she said. "THIS IS NOT SIMPLE!!!" it shouted. "lets get on with this" it said. the rumbling in Marions stomach got worse. yet... better at the same time, it felt better. even starting to feel nice.
hee hee, i actually do like it. Please continue ^^
hey Helthrow, i have been pissed off lately because there are so many awesome looking Doujins out there, but most of them are in Japanese, i don't know if you know Japanese or not, but can you translate this doujin for me? http://exhentai.org/g/306854/18ad734182/ if you don't know japanese, then can i ask that you please make up your own translations based on what you see?
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i'll get on it after hunters is finished
next part Marion felt the rumbling getting lower in her body, until suddenly, she felt something push it's way out of her, she looked down to see a bulge in the suit, it started to move around her body, it felt amazing, then another bulge, and another, and then lots of them. she looked down to see them moving, they rubbed against her skin and it felt like nothing she had ever felt before. "so, do you wish to stay? where you can feel something even better than this every day?" said the creature. "or go, but know that you can never return and that you will never feel this good ever again." Marion's mind was currently swimming in a sea of euphoria "fuck if i'm going." she managed to say through the streams of orgasm. "now make me feel even better." she said. "very well." a tentacle lashed out and went into her suit through the neck of it, then started to pour cum into it. she felt the thick cum running down her skin. down he arms and onto her hands. "oh yes... more... more..." several more tentacles came over and entered her suit, they began to spray as well. there were now several bulges in her suit where the cum had pooled in the tight suit. "can you put more of those ball things in me? please." she begged. "i'll do a lot more than that." it said. the floor openned up and a pool of cum appeared. she looked down and smiled as she was lowered. "do you want it inside you?" it asked. "of course." she laughed, her eyes had rolled into the back of her head. a pair of tentacles shot out and ripped a small hole in the bottom of her suit, they then crawled into her vagina and pried the skin apart, the cum was now free to flow inside, and it did she could feel the hot fluid flowing. "i need more!" she yelled. a special tentacle crawled into her vagina. "this will draw my seeds from the pool and push it into your womb whilst not letting it out." it was a tight fit, but it was so much better than anything else she had ever felt. "and afterwards, your milk will nourish it to full strength. "but i don't have very much..." she said. "don't fret." said the creature, then it said something in a language she didn't understand and the creatures that had been in the balls crawled up to he breasts, she then felt the creatures pushing in. she threw her head back as her breasts inflated, milk began to leak from them. the feeling was incredible. "and it will only get better." the end? sorry if that felt rushed, but i have writers block on this one. i may write more of it if you want, but i am going to start work on PK's request. i'm interested to try this. unfortunately, i don't have anything like Photoshop or Paintshop-pro so i'm going to have to use just Paint, but you asked me inparticular and this is for free, dammit.
i did upload a few pics, but apparently /f/ was the wrong place to put them, i'll put them up in /req/ next time since it was a request from Parasite
just over 2/3 of the way, i will be the first to admit that it isn't too good, but it's my first time doing this so deal with it.
sorry for not being on, but i have been completely backed up with work, and other stuff. here is what i have done so far. here is what i have done and i hope to finish it soon http://gurochan.net/req/res/17003.html
well, i'm sorry to those of you who were looking forward to my next work, been out of it for a bit but am now back to give you another story, the invasion story that i talked about a while back, it isn't finished yet but it will be. Garudo Fortress was quiet, the only sounds that could be heard was the wind and the wail of the desert. but the silence was soon shattered as along the path, a cloaked figure walked. behind the figure was a cart pulled by another hooded figure. the cart contained 2 large stone coffins, side-by-side. before the 2 could make it to the steps up to the fortress, they were ambushed by a pair of guards, they jumped down in front of the cart. "halt, who dares trespass in Garudo territory?" asked one of them. "i am an ally, or at least, i soon will be." said a female voice. "explain." said the other Guard. "i bring a gift." the cloaked person threw off her cloak to reveal herself, the only things she was wearing was a pair of Panties and 2 Re-dead masks strung together into a bra. the 2 guards looked her up and down, but their eyes stopped at the bra. the eyes of the masks freezing them in place. "my Name is Link, you will learn it as i am your new mistress." she said, snapped her fingers and the straps of the bra began to retreat into the mask, she picked them up to reveal that Tentacles were all over the insides of the mask, Link threw the masks at the girls, the Tentacles coiled around their faces and into their ears and noses. the 2 quickly submitted. "good, now, we have work to do rounding up your sisters." said Link, the 2 zombies moaned in agreement
HELTHROW, YOU'RE BACK!!!
Link and the 2 Zombie Garudo's walked into the fortress and found themselves in a room with a jail cell, inside a man got to his feet. "come on, let me out, i'm sorry, i won't come into Garudo territory again." said the man. Link looked at the man he was reasonably handsome... and she could always use more zombies. "don't worry, you'll get out." she said. she walked over to the bars and dropped her cloak revealing her supple and well sculpted body. she grabbed her breasts and started kneading them "but you'll have to do something for me first." the man gulped and walked over to the bars, he put his hands threw the gaps and grabbed the soft breast. "oh, you're naughty, lets teach you a lesson. she walked over to the door and without him seeing, she slipped a Maggot into the lock, it quickly picked the lock and crawled out. "good boy." she said to it. she then walked inside and the man took his cloths off, Link got down onto her knee's and quickly popped the maggot into her mouth and letting it sit there. she then slowly slid her lips over the head and then the shaft of his penis. the Maggot crawled into his pee-hole and wriggled down the shaft. "oh god, you're mouth is amazing." said the man. she felt his seed fill her mouth, she looked up at the man and then swollowed it. "you should try my other one." she said. she got up and forced him to his back. she then got back on her knee's with her Vagina poised over his face. at this point, her belly began to grow as the dormant creatures inside her began to move. a little pink ball of skin shot out of her vagina and landed on his face, he tried to scream, but the skin ball began to move down over his mouth, then face and then his entire body, cocooning him. she then saw as the acids began to corrode his body, then Acids became Re-Dead semen and the man became a Re-Dead. the Cocoon broke and he stepped out of it, Link got a mask from her cloak and put it on the New Zombies face, this one didn't have Tentacles, but it naturally grafted itself to his skin. "come on, this will be our command center, go unload the Coffins from the wagon." Link ordered the Zombies. they shuffled away to follow their Mistress' wish. (the invasion has began)
FOR THE LOVE OF GOD CONTINUE!!!
You've got some good ideas, Helthrow. Looking forward to this invasion.