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No. 1554 ID: d8f391
Ffreq here, writer of http://gurochan.net/lit/res/1310.html . Of course I'm NOT forgetting about that thread, but as I suggested and people agreed, I'm also starting this one - so that I could run two stories simultaneously and double the fun.

Like in that thread, I'll be writing the story part-by-part based on YOUR choices. For example, "option A: the killer throws the girl into the pool and turns on electricity; option B: the killer drowns the girl in the pool" - then I wait for a few days for your votes, and the story continues based on the votes. "A few days" actually depends on how actively you will be voting. :)

THE PLOT:
A killer pays really big money to all the staff of the school so that they could let him do whatever he wants. It's a private girls-only highschool (I suppose, ages from 15 to 19); all the doors can shut automatically. The teachers tell the girls that today will be the drill ("fake emergency situation, to train pupils what they should do in such situations"), so that they don't panic when all this lockdown happens. The teachers leave the classrooms at a certain time under some innocuous guise, and the doors shut - to the girls in the classes it just looks like it happened accidentally. The killer then wanders around the school; he unlocks the door, picks the girl he likes, and lures her out of the class (he can say that he's a worker of the "emergency staff" and this is an evacuation etc., so that the other girls don't suspect anything). And then he kills her, and can go back for another victim, or visit some other place in the school. The school has a lot of interesting places - classrooms, gym (with cloakroom and showers), swimming pool, library, etc.

Let's DECIDE the following things:
- Only realistic girls (any nationalities etc.) or maybe elf girls too? Sort of a fantasy element in it (but I don't think elfs differ TOO much from human girls in this case :)
- The killer. One guy? One guy + one girl (going to different parts of the school, not sticking together)? The last variant lets do some F/F stuff maybe. :)
- Just come up with interesting places in the school.

After it's set up, I'll write the introduction ASAP.
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>> No. 4621 ID: d1894e
I kinda like Option A better, but since we just saw Jane, I'd like Option B for variety.

So B.
>> No. 4628 ID: 6a1c4e
Why not both? Start with option A, and then Lead into option B, only with Jane making Anna rape the girl before she's allowed to pee. Possibly force the girl to lick Anna off and then as she cums, she loses control of her bladder and pisses all over the girl's face and mouth. Then Jane could deflower and rape the girl with a dildo (at that age, it seems likely that she's a virgin?) while Anna holds her head over the toilet, shoving it under but letting her breath occasionally and only finally drowning her as Jane makes her cum. (even better if it's an elf girl since Jane could spot the orgasm coming and tell Anna to hold her under for good) It'd be great if the timing worked out so that she starts spewing bubbles and choking on water just a few seconds after she cums.
>> No. 4671 ID: e3408c
b
>> No. 4678 ID: 460d1e
I support Flying M's suggestion, but if you'd rather one of the two
I'll say b
>> No. 4679 ID: 558fab
B!
>> No. 4680 ID: d8f391
Hey everyone, I was banned for a few days for posting a not-very-obvious-3d in req, but here I am. I like Flying M's idea quite a lot and I think I'll go with it; but not earlier than this weekend cause weeks start to get quite busy. So, somewhere around the weekend.
>> No. 4681 ID: d8f391
Also, I'm always open for random ideas about exquisite kills, cause I discovered that a surprisingly hard part is to think of future options when I've written the text itself.
>> No. 4730 ID: 9a93ab
Ooh, boy. I'm excited now. :D Looking forward to it.
>> No. 4764 ID: d8f391
Well unfortunately I have to say that I'm postponing it a bit, cause I have a lot of urgent stuff to do in the nearest couple of weeks, but when I get back to it, I'll surely start with this proposal.
>> No. 4799 ID: 102ae0
Well, I can be patient. :3 I've also been thinking about a hanging/crucifixion rape (where the rapist supports the victim's weight thereby delaying their suffocation...that's gotta mess with a person's mind, huh?) for John, but after some research it seems like crucifixion deaths occurred due to exposure and other causes, not asphyxiation, so that wouldn't work, and I had this great idea for doing it with cafeteria tables too... :/ But hanging's still in as a suggestion. Also I thought of a similar rape using an improvised rack (cafeteria table + rope + mop handle or some similar pole to wind the rope, could be 'locked' by wedging against the table legs?(the rope would be tied to the victim's wrists and ankles then passed over the ends of the table so that the pole could be used to twist and tighten it from behind the table, stretching the victim out as the rope is gradually tightened while John rapes her?)) The problem is, it's a two person job, it would have to be wound from behind/underneath the table, and it would require a fair amount of strength to wind, even with the pole to help. Maybe John and the girls will meet back up in the cafeteria later and they could help him before separating again? Anyway, just some ideas, since you said you were having trouble thinking of things.
>> No. 4932 ID: 460d1e
Bump to make sure this doesn't slip away.
>> No. 4934 ID: 65f5d9
You could try making a hole in top of a locker, and tying her hands togather and pulling the rope attach to her hands though the hole, the rest is easy to think of; rape, anal rape, or so on.
>> No. 5061 ID: aa5cdf
bump?
>> No. 5230 ID: d1578e
I do hope this doesn't die right when a story I suggested was about to be written... :C
>> No. 5258 ID: b4e3d0
bump for revival
>> No. 5259 ID: 65f5d9
more man
>> No. 5300 ID: a20bea
i love this story, coming from a female perspective. it has a lovely balance to it. please write more [;
>> No. 5304 ID: e3f74c
make one where two girls that are something like the somewhat stereotypical snooty rich cheerleaders. gets attached to a hose thing that fills her full of large amounts of semen and some new chemical that permanently increases her hormones like estrogen and other sex related hormones that ends up tuning her into a sex maniac, as well as causing ovulation to increase and makes ovarys make new eggs,along with causing each looks 10 months pregnant with amount in them.make it so the person who filled them asks them if they want more and maybe one says she does says so he fills the one up till she burst causing her to spray blood and stuff all over her friend.

the other girl for some reason or other the other girl is spared.but ends up being very pregnant and horny so maybe create a side story for her maybe she volunteered herself or the character who killed her friend sells her. to a underground sex slave organization so she could get lots of sex and gives birth to her dozen+ babies while being filmed or something.and maybe to add some guro to it they only have female slaves so any boys she has are killed and fed to her,while the girls will being used as more sex slaves.
just some suggestions
>> No. 5346 ID: 0f7b39
-1'
>> No. 5364 ID: 27cd34
I don't think that last suggestion really fits the genre of this story. o_o
>> No. 5366 ID: f03b95
anyone up for throwing drain cleaner into the story?
>> No. 5502 ID: f7387f
That could be interesting. o_o
>> No. 5558 ID: d8f391
Have you been missing me? c(^_^c) I surely have been missing you. Now, I won't promise anything (in terms of for how long will I stay here again), because I have already proven myself to be a sudden disappearer, but let's go on. At least I should keep a promise about how the next victim will die, right? :)

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Reminder: John picked up a companion - a talented girl called Anna Perez who proved herself to be an exquisite killer; Jane got into the trap set up by a rebellious teacher, but managed to drown her and kill every girl in the swimming pool, as a downside - get completely soaked.

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Jane reached for her cell phone, examining it to understand whether it survived the unplanned swimming. Apparently yes... How lucky. She dialed John's number and put the phone between her shoulder and ear, unbuttoning the completely soaked shirt. Damn, that was... She wasn't even sure if she had more reserve clothes. "Jane? You're off schedule, something happened?" - "Well, sort of. Nothing special, but you need to see something. Come here, I'm in, uh, main swimming room, you remember where it is, right?" - "Sure. Will be there in a couple of minites." Putting the phone away, Jane took off her shirt and unzipped the jeans. Of course, they both had taken a couple of reserve clothes, just in case it gets stained with blood of the victims, but this was totally unplanned. She reached for her bag...

"Jane, I... Um. You sure you wanted me to see... this?" - John just couldn't resist smiling, as he entered the room behind Jane, who was crouching near her bag, wearing only white bra and panties. Wet bra and panties. - "Know what, fuck you," - Jane replied a bit angrily, getting new underwear out of it. - "Turn away." - "Hey, you called me to see something, and now... Okay, okay," - John giggled, turning around and looking at the bloody mess around him. Behind him, Jane, completely undressed, was wiping herself with the towel and putting on dry new underwear. "So, what happened?" - "We're not alone here, John." - "What? How can we be not alone?" - "A teacher attacked me here. Erica What's-her-name, remember, the one that was the last to agree... Well, she's down there in the water, you can check," - Jane was quickly putting on the light-blue shirt. - "I doubt that there are a lot more fools like her, but still... Fuck." - "What?" - John turned around, seeing Jane rummage in the bag. - "I don't have another pair of jeans. Only... Only this," - Jane took the dark knee-length skirt out of the bag, and John laughed. "You want to look like these schoolgirls?" - "Very funny," - Jane quickly put the skirt on, finishing the change process. - "Well, actually that's all, I wanted to warn that there might be some underestimated surprises."

"Um... Jane, actually *I* have a surprise for you, too." - "Huh?" - "Anna... Come in." The door behind John opened, and Anna slipped through it, coming closer and standing next to him. "John, what... What the fuck is that? Who is she?" - "It's Anna Perez, from 2C. You know, when I was at the gym, she exhibited quite amusing qualities... Jane. I think she's like us. I've let her do a couple of kills, and that's amazing." Jane was looking at the girl with high suspicion, and then at John with a bit of anger. - "Do you have any idea what can it lead to?" - "Jane, listen - I have. I take all the risks myself, okay? Anyway, I didn't give her firearms, if anything would have gone wrong, I would just send a bullet between her eyes." Anna, being a spectator of this, swallowed a bit. Jane was silent for a few seconds, examining the looks of the girl. - "So... Anna, right?" - "Yes," - the girl nodded. - "You're Jane, I presume?" - "Right. Well, John, you know what..." - the killer came a few steps closer, still looking at Anna with an examining look. - "Mind if I take her with me? You've had some fun together with her. My turn. I want to see what she's capable of, too," - Jane smiled. "Okay... She's yours," - John nodded. - "She's a talented girl... Anyway, we're wasting time here. I guess you're... uh... finished here?" - John looked around. "Yes, pretty much it. I'm moving somewhere else." - "Me too then," - all three of them proceeded into the exit door, and found themselves just outside the swimming pool area. "We'll go here then," - Jane pointed to the right. - "Anna?" The girl followed her, and soon they both disappeared around the corner for John.

"So, tell me about yourself," - Jane said, letting the girl walk in front of her. - "What have you already done, if John thinks so good of you?" - "Well... Crushed the head and ripped off the jaw of one blue-stocking, tortured my old enemy with splinters under the nails and then gutted her... In the past, kicked one elf in the cunt. Things like this," - Anna smiled. - "Is that ok?" - "Well, that's... impressive," - Jane nodded. As the girls were passing the now locked toilet, Anna stopped. - "Jane, I guess I'm not in position to tell us what to do, but may I visit the toilet? I, um, want to piss." Jane looked at her and after a second or so reached for the keys. - "Okay. But don't think that I won't follow you - you still haven't earned my trust." Anna nodded, and as the lock on the door clicked, pushed the door and stepped inside...

Only to be greeted by another student, seemingly younger than she, probably 1st grade. The girl looked in surprise at the unexpected visitor - the student in the sport uniform of tight blouse and shorts - but smiled, as soon as she saw Jane, dressed as the Emergency Squad member. - "Finally! Oh god, finally. I was here when it locked, and..." - Jane looked at her with surprise, then at Anna. - "Umm, yes, we're finally here," - Jane stepped inside and put her bag onto the floor of the toilet room, reaching for the files of students. The room itself was surprisingly clean and de-odored for a public toilet... "So, who are you? We need to fill in these forms, you know." - "Rebecca Hiwin, 1A," - the girl replied gladly, and Jane quickly found her file. Well, yes, Rebecca Hiwin, nothing very special about her... 15 years old, elf... Elf. Jane didn't notice it immediately from her looks - sharp ears were hidden by her dark long hair. "Becky, you know what..." - Jane pretended to mark something in the list and put the files back into the bag. - "I think I know what we'll do with you." The next second Jane's knee slammed right into Rebecca's crotch, and the girl screamed, grabbing herself between the legs through the skirt and bending over... One rude push - and she fell to the floor, clutching her thighs together. Must have been the first time for her... Jane looked at Anna, who was standing slightly aside - and noticed a look of excitement and admiration on her face.

"You wanted to piss, right? Well, she'll be your toilet," - Jane pointed at the elf. "What? How? What do you mean?" - "I don't want you to use toilet. Piss on her. Hey, I don't ask of something humiliating for *you*," - Jane smiled and came closer to Anna, stepping over the girl on the floor. - "You will now take off your shorts," - Jane's fingers touched the narrow strip of bare skin between Anna's blouse and shorts, - "Sit on top of her face and just empty your bladder." Anna was looking at her with surprise and a bit of uncertainty. - "And if... If she will want to bite me, or something?" - "Well, I hope my leg on her crotch will convince you not to do this," - Jane smiled and kicked the elf in the belly, making her roll onto her back. - "And now, come on, take this off. Don't be shy, you don't have anything there that I haven't seen myself, right?" - the killer winked, and Anna slowly pulled her short shorts down her legs, revealing her naked groin and perfectly shaven pubis. "Good girl," - Jane whispered, when the girl stood in front of her, bottomless. - "Now you, listen," - she turned to the elf on the floor. - "If you just try to hurt her, I'll be sure to squeeze your guts out," - Jane's foot touched the girl's crotch. - "Is that clear?" The elf sobbed, looking in fear at both of them, but eventually nodded... Anna stood above her and kneeled, so that her pussy was right above Rebecca's face. "Lower, my darling," - Jane whispered, observing it from behind. - "Make it so that her lips touch your labia..." As Anna lowered herself more, almost shoving her pussy into the elf's face, Rebecca howled desperately, and tears flowed from her eyes even more. "Sshh..." - Jane's boot pressed slightly on the girl's crotch through her skirt. - "Don't be stupid... Anna, give her a drink, please?"

Anna gulped and closed her eyes. Even with the killer being behind her and not being able to actually see the process, she needed some time to overcome shyness... Within a couple of seconds, light-yellow jet of piss streamed from her pussy, and Becky's short scream was quickly interrupted by the liquid running right into her mouth. The girl coughed instinctively, choking, but still managed to swallow some piss, only for her mouth to be quickly fulling with more of it, and more, and more... Salty streams of tears reached her mouth eventually and mixed now with all that urine that was coming from Anna's pussy. There was too much of it, Rebecca just couldn't drink it fast enough; soon yellow streams were spreading all over her face, getting into her nostrils, everywhere... Just as the girl was almost choking of constant submission of more and more liquid, Anna sighed quietly, feeling it was over. The bottom of her belly didn't feel heavy anymore, and the last drops of piss fell into the open mouth of the elf, who, now being able to take a deep breath, burst into tears, humiliated and lying behind Anna's legs... "Good girl," - Jane whispered and, when Anna carefully got up from Becky's face, removed her foot from the elf's crotch. - "And you... Good girl too," - Jane smiled, turning to Anna. The girl nodded, looking at the elf... "I... May I go to the real toilet now? You know, to clean myself, wash down there." - "Yes, sure... Although you know, wait a minute. What I want to do with her next, involves you holding her head, and she's all over in your urine... So maybe you'll wash your hands a little bit later?" - "Mm, okay. What do you want to do with her?"

Jane smiled. - "Have you ever been with a girl in bed, Anna?" - "Uh... No, why?" - "Well, my next question would be if you had been with an elf girl, then. But you probably know anyway what they are capable of, right?" - "You mean squirting?" - "Oh yes," - Jane turned back to Rebecca. - "Let's see how much of it is in this one..." - "No..." - Becky, who till this moment was lying on the floor and just sobbing, stood up a bit and tried to crawl away from Jane. - "No... No!.. I'm a virgin, please, no, don't do this, please!!..." Anna laughed, quickly grabbing the elf by her soaked with piss hair and slightly lifting her head up, so that the girl screamed from pain. - "We just don't want you to die a virgin, Becky... We're doing you a service!" Jane watched the scene with slight amusement. This girl is good indeed... "Anna, why don't you drown her in the toilet?.. While I rape her tight little pussy..." - with these words, Jane quickly reached for the girl's hips and pulled the skirt with panties down them, revealing her naked bottom with a nice pink tight entrance of a virgin pussy. Rebecca screamed and tried to fight off with her legs - without much result, as the next thing Jane did was slamming her fist into the soft bare groin of the girl and making her howl with pain and clutch her thighs together... "I'll get her there," - Anna smiled, grabbing the elf's hair again and pulling her towards the toilet cabin, opening the door wide and turning the almost helpless girl onto her belly, so that her head was right above the toilet...

Just as Rebecca realized her fate was unevitable, she screamed - and the same moment Anna shoved her head deep into the toilet seat, beginning to drown her in the water. And at the same moment, the elf could feel the sharp nails of Jane rudely penetrating her between the legs - and in a fraction of a second sharp pain of tearing hymen, which made her whole body shake violently and instinctively gulp some water from the toilet... "Hold her like this, and let her breathe a few times," - Jane said quickly, taking a brief look at what was happening in the cabin and concentrating on elf's hips now. Some blood was dripping from her fingers as they exited Rebecca's pussy, and she rudely shoved the three fingers back into her vulva, grabbing the girl by belly with the other hand and beginning to rape her... The girl's belly was moving significantly up and down, as her struggles resulted in uncontrollable breathes, and each of these breathes filled her lungs with dirty toilet water even more... In less than a minute, Jane could already feel spasmic movements of the girl's muscles. "Give her some air for a second!" - she shoted to Anna, and the girl immediately pulled elf's head out of the water by hair. One barely controlled breathe in - and the girl's face submerged into the water again with a splash...

... But her body, even tortured like this, couldn't do anything but feel pleasure from Jane's fingers moving deep inside her pussy. Jane could already feel, despite violent struggles and movements of her body, how the muscles inside her vagina start to squeeze her fingers tighter, and how with every penetration the girl gets wetter and wetter... Soon, not only blood, but elf's squirt juice started to drip from her fingers as they were exiting Rebecca's pussy, and Jane could easily see that the ending was close. "Don't let her breathe anymore," - she murmured to Anna, looking viciously at the elf's hips, and continued to plunge deep into her... Now, Rebecca was clearly agonizing. With her lungs full of water, she was trying to do her last breathes, resulting in her belly almost shaking and squeezing her vagina even more... Last seconds of her life, when her fingers were all white, grabbing the edge of the toilet in agony - and a powerful stream of squirt gushed from between her slightly parted legs, straight onto the floor between her knees, when Jane pulled her fingers out of her... Rebecca's agonizing shakes mixed with her orgasmic shakes, and when there was a whole puddle of squirt on the floor under her, she was already dead... Anna carefully released her head - and Rebecca completely slided down onto the floor, silent and immobile. For some seconds, there was silence, then Anna slowly came closer to Jane near Becky's hips and observed a big puddle of squirt on the floor... "Unbelievable," - she whispered, smiling just a bit weirdly. "Yes," - Jane smiled in return, only now realizing that her head, while she was on her knees, was a bit closer to Anna's naked hips than it would be comfortable.

"Now, you wanted to clean yourself up, right?" - "Ah, yes..." - Anna went into another cabin, and after a minute or so of carefully washing her hands, inner thighs and pussy, came out, to be greeted by Jane holding her shorts. "Here," - she passed them to the girl and watched her dress up. - "You know what... I must say you are *really* a good student," - she smiled, opening the door of the toilet and letting Anna come out first...

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Heh, took me a couple of days. Hope that it's still relatively good, compared to the old parts. I can understand if there will be almost nobody reading it now, because a lot of time has passed, etc; but if there will be readers and if you want this story to be continued, as in good old times, here's a set of choices for you.

Option A: Jane and Anna find that red-haired girl that I mentioned very very very long time ago. She's in the infirmary and was waiting for the doctor when the lockdown happened (maybe she's indeed ill, maybe she was just faking). I want her to be 4th grade, meaning she's aged 18-19. Sort of a free-choice here what Jane and Anna can do to her.

Option B: as we saw two "episodes" with Jane, as always, we'll switch to John now to see his adventures. He wanders into a class of 4th grade students also (age 18-19, oldest grade in the school) and feels brave enough to fear them all. Let's say, he starts sort of a "biology lesson" about human anatomy with real-life examples in front of the shocked class. And for a nice change, I want the victim to be a chocolate-black girl with a really good figure, probably some cheerleader or a model or something like that.

So, if someone is still reading this and still wants continuation, VOTE! :) I'll check back in a few days to see how it will be going.
>> No. 5559 ID: 558fab
B... nothing better than some gore to make my day while I recover from a broken toe.
>> No. 5569 ID: bf3555
Hey, welcome back!

I vote for Option B.
>> No. 5570 ID: 65f5d9
I think A, drug that bitch up with something to casue her heart to give out of several hours of being tied down, and taken advanage of by jane, and anna. and some very big objects, and later, sharp ones!
>> No. 5605 ID: 460d1e
I was beginning to think you'd forgotten about us!
Glad to see you're still with us and alright.
I think I'd like to see choice B.
>> No. 5607 ID: b7c2e2
Yes, your back!
B, I alway like a good anatomy lesson
>> No. 5612 ID: 4c10eb
Good to have you back, Ffreq, I'm going to pick option B here, but I'd hate to see A forgotten.
>> No. 5647 ID: 9bf22e
I vote for option B, just no black chick, it would totally ruin the next part for me.
>> No. 5648 ID: 65f5d9
how about black, and white/asain chick? comparing size of ass and breasts and so on.
>> No. 5794 ID: 460d1e
Bump! So it's not Forgotten!
>> No. 5803 ID: 65f5d9
more
>> No. 5861 ID: d8f391
Well, tbh I don't have many excuses for the long break again, apart from lots of paperwork at work in the past few weeks and, I'll be honest, some sort of writer's block; I had most of this part written a couple of weeks ago already but for some reason it took me time to finish it. Still, it's here; and we're following John's adventures, as proposed by option B.

195 I hadn't forgotten of course, it's just that during summer, I didn't really feel much into all this. Now I'm more into this (idk, autumn and spring are good for psycho things?), although as you can see some things stood in my way. But I hope to continue this anyway; and by the way, I think this story should be more or less coming to an end. Not because I'm tired of it, it's just that it's already long and the thread is already enormous, and overall, stories are good when they aren't way too long. I think I'll be aiming for some climax in the story now.
198 and 199 sorry, but I already wrote a significant part with the black girl when I saw your comment, anyway, I've decided to introduce a while elf girl here too.
Note: a couple of things here are inspired by http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w2EZbGPtr6A (you can watch this more or less simultaneously with the first part of the story) and the black girl, Valerie, is inspired by this model: http://i27.fastpic.ru/big/2011/0905/46/7b9096d22ef6f20e1dd11b1a48c3b046.jpg

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Watching the girls turn around the corner, I smiled and after some hesitation walked to the staircase and went down to the first floor. Somewhere here should be a security room... Ah, there it is. As I unlocked the door and walked in, the first thing that I saw was a huge camera controlling center. Imagery from all the security cameras was transmitted there, onto several monitors behind the rather large controller. Taking my time, I sat into the chair by it and for some time was just examining the imagery - I should say, of pretty good quality. Not HD, but still I could clearly distinguish girls' faces on the screen. Most of them were already worrying - a little bit less than two hours have passed already, and still no help had arrived. Some of them were walking nervously in the class rooms, some - looking into the windows... Hm. What if I... This idea seemed absolutely crazy to me at first, but soon I reached for my bag to get the students' files from it. I wonder if I can control a whole crowd, not just a single girl? Sounds risky a bit, but...

Turning the pages, I finally found a class where only 10 girls out of 15 were present today at school. The less of them there will be, the easier and safer it will be to me. Grade 4A... They're adult already, eighteens and nineteens, but it shouldn't be much of a problem, I guess. After some manipulation with the controller, I managed to find the video stream from the class that they were sitting in. Nothing very surprising there, same stuff - some of the girls were wandering around the classroom, some were just sitting and talking with each other... I saw one of them trying to dial some number on her mobile phone and then almost throwing it away in rage. I smiled - it was a good idea to leave the mobile phone jammer switched on. Ok, and what was the subject that they were studying there... I turned to my files again. Ah. Anatomy. I'm pretty sure their lessons so far have been only theoretical... Why don't I show them some practice. The next few minutes took me to prepare necessary stuff and put them in the top section of the bag, as well as equip myself with one more pistol on the other side of the belt - just in case something goes wrong. Am I ready to go? Seems yes.

The door opened with a quiet squeak, and all the girls in the class turned to me. Some of them were sitting by their desks, a couple - on the windowsill and looking out of the window. Near the door, there was an abandoned now teacher's table, with some diagrams behind it. I took a brief look - a scheme of human body, how nice... "Um, hi girls," - I tried to look a bit nervous, as if the evacuation was going wrong. - "I'm from the Emergency Squad, and I guess you've been waiting for the evacuation for quite some time, right?" Some of the girls nodded. "Well, actually we have some troubles going on here, basically the evacuation buses didn't arrive in time, they had some situation there. So we've decided to warn you about all this, because two hours is not really the period we were going to make you wait. So I'll just sit here with you and as soon as I get the message, we'll start the evacuation, okay?"

I locked the door and proceeded towards the teacher's desk. I felt how their looks followed me - I guess they weren't very happy with me sitting here with them. They're adult already, and of course someone like me feels an unnecessary guest in their company... I sat behind the desk and took the students' files out of it, placing them on the table. What I also took out of the bag, but didn't show yet, was a pair of handcuffs and a rope, which I left lying on my knees. Briefly looking at girls sitting in front of me, a couple of meters away, I picked my victim. Black girl with a chocolate skin, dark slightly curvy long hair and in a neat white shirt. "Um, I need someone to help me fill the papers, while we wait... You, maybe?" The girl nodded and stood up from her desk, coming to me and standing to my left - just enough to not see the handcuffs on my knees yet. "What's your name?" - "Valerie," - the girl replied. "Okay, Valerie, so here is the list of your class, just mark the absent ones with an X, right?" The girl bended slightly forward to get a pen from the desk, and at this exact moment I quickly grabbed her wrists and locked them into the handcuffs with a juicy click. Even before she really realized what was happening, I threw the rope over the tube under the ceiling, which was holding the blackboard in place, and connected it to the handcuffs, quickly stretching it and thus making her arms go into the air. She screamed in panic, and for a few seconds there was an absolute silence in the class. "What the fuck... What the fuck are you do-aahh!.." - Valerie couldn't resist screaming, when I pulled the rope even lower, forcing her arms go higher to a painful state. All the other girls were just staring at us, while I was quickly attaching the other end of the rope to the blackboard behind the girl. Now she was ready - standing right in front of the class, with her arms raised up and almost unable to move. "Well, girls... The fact is, I'm not quite from the Emergency Squad," - I said, pulling a pistol from my belt...

A couple more seconds of silence, and suddenly one of the girls almost jumped from her desk and rushed to the locked door. The next second she realized the door won't open - and then with a loud bang she limped and slided down the door, leaving a little blood on the shiny metal right where her heart was. Some smoke was coming out of the barrel of my pistol. "Does anybody else want to try?" Silence was the answer, and 8 pairs of eyes, frightened to death. Some of them were sobbing, looking at their dead classmate by the door... "Good decision," - I turned back to Valerie, who was frightened probably even more than the others, given her state. "What lesson were you having when the lockdown happened?" - I asked her quietly. "Ana... anatomy," - she replied, trying to move away from me, but without much success. "Oh, that's good," - I smiled and turned back to the class. Probably it was too risky to turn away from them, but I was pretty sure they were too frightened to do anything stupid. - "Let's continue the lesson, girls. Do you know how interesting the human body is, actually?" - I looked back at Valerie with probably such an obvious look that she understood everything. Tears flowed from her eyes, and she was only able to whisper "No, please..." before she started crying. I saw one of the girls in the back of the class faint and cover her mouth with her hand...

I went and stood behind Valerie, embracing her from behind and starting to slowly unbutton her shirt, from top to bottom. Revealing her dark chocolate skin... She wasn't even resisting, probably she already realized nothing could already help her. Only salty tears were sometimes falling onto my hands, and I could hear her murmuring something... Finally I opened up her shirt, revealing nice pink bra and a perfectly fit belly. Slightly noticeable abs, nice curves... "Nice body you have here," - I said quietly. - "Who are you? A cheerleader? A fashion model?" - "Model," - she whispered quietly, still sobbing. I nodded and looked at the classroom, still standing behind Valerie and putting left arm on her belly, making her noticeably shiver. "So, girls, anatomy, as I promised. When did you eat last time, Valerie?" - "In the morning..." - "Ah, that's good for you then. Because I'm gonna show these girls where the stomach is located..." Placing my hand just above her accurate navel, I suddenly clutched my fist, at the same time pressing it towards her belly. No matter how fit her belly muscles were, I still could do that... And I clearly felt a relatively small sack, her stomach, under my fingers.

I clutched it harder - and Valerie bent over as much as she could, gasping for air and letting out a painful moan... Slowly, I started to move my hand, moving her stomach a little bit too. She just couldn't resist screaming, clutching her teeth and wiggling in my embrace... Even the smallest movements of my hand resulted in terrible pain for her, she bent forward slightly, and I clearly felt how strained her belly muscles were. I began moving my hand back and forth, making Valerie let out pathetic screams and moans... After what felt like a minute of torture I finally let her go - she was breathing heavily, swallowing her almost happened vomit and not looking at her classmates... Humiliation, the best part of all this. Not only I tortured her, I did it right in front of her clasmates... They didn't look good, too. Most of them were pressing themselves against their chairs, and I saw their poses - defensive, arms protecting their bellies, as if they were afraid this would happen with them too...

"Sshhh, darling..." - I kissed Valerie on her cheek, and she quickly turned away from me. A pain like this dies away pretty quickly for some reason, and I waited for 10 or 15 seconds for her to catch her breath. - "This, girls, was the stomach. It's surprising how you can reach organs from outside of the body, right?" - Without any warning, I pressed my hand against the girl's side, just under her ribcage, and got her kidney. Valerie whined, trying to bend over to this side, just as if I was tickling her... Her teeth were clutched together, eyes closed, and one more painful scream came out of her mouth, as I started to move the kidney slightly away from its normal place... "This is where the kidney is located, girls," - I smiled, looking at the shocked faces of her clasmates. - "I bet this way it's much more easy to memorize this than by looking at those dull schemes," - I pointed at the paper behind me. - "Kidneys, hm... What interesting things about them to tell you? Ah, there are two of them. So if something happens to one..." - I squeezed my fingers harder, and Valerie's screams reached a totally new pitch, - "There's always another one to replace it." I put another hand on the other side of Valerie's body, and her pain was doubled, when I grabbed another kidney too through her skin...

"Let her go!" - a sudden scream from one of the girls caught my attention and interrupted the torture. I looked at the classroom and saw the one who said it - curly blond hair, pretty pale face... Long ears, seen through hair. Elf. I smiled and, reaching for the pistol, came closer to the girl - luckily for me, she was sitting at the front desk, so I didn't have to go and be surrounded by all of them. "OK," - I smiled and pointed the pistol at her from the height of my belt. - "I let her go, as you can see. But I need someone to replace her, then. Someone brave, like you... Get up." She wasn't that brave, actually - her braveness ended with her "let her go" shout. She was looking at me with fear... "Get up, or your brains will be all over that girl," - I pointed at her classmate sitting behind her. The elf swallowed and slowly stood up, and I could see her shiver slightly... "What's your name?" - "Ke... Kelly..." - "Alright, Kelly, you'll come with me," - not putting the pistol away, with the other hand I rudely grabbed her wrists and pulled behind me to the blackboard, near Valerie. Quickly getting a new pair of handcuffs and another piece of rope out of the bag, I did the same procedure with her - and withing half a minute, she was tied just like Valerie, with her arms raised into the air and almost unable to move away.

"Ahh, elf anatomy. This is an even more interesting thing, girls," - I smiled and stepped away from Kelly. - "I personally love elves for this," - with all power I could get from a short running start, I smashed my boot right between her slightly apart legs from below - and this scream was even louder than everything Valerie produced so far. The elf squeezed her thighs together, moaning and wiggling in her tied position, she just couldn't stand on her legs, hanging on the rope... I could see tears appear in her eyes... I turned back to the class. It was now very easy to distinguish elves from humans, even without looking closely at their ears - elves were squeezing their legs together and looking at Kelly with a very compassionate look... "You have a lovely voice, you know..." - I came closer to Kelly, touching her chin. - "Now, who can answer me, which body system is responsible for this? You maybe?" - I turned to Valerie, and she shivered, possibly thinking that I had already forgotten about her and her tortures were over. "Re... Reproductive system?" - "Yes, right. Then tell me, what's inside you? What's a reproductive system?" - "There... There's vagina... Womb... O-ovaries..." - "Totally right. Good girl," - I smiled and turned back to the class. - "Well, probably you think that you can cause such pain only to elves," - I pointed at Kelly, who was still breathing heavily and frowning from pain. - "The thing is, you can do it to humans too... You just need to know where to strike. And you," - I turned back to Valerie, - "said it absolutely right. Ovaries." I was standing right in front of her - in a distance of a punch. And this punch went right to her left ovary, slightly lower than the waist line. The black girl didn't even scream - she bent over as much as she could, gulping air with her wide open mouth... Her eyes were almost popping out of the sockets, and I punched her again, from the other side, into another ovary, this time making her scream deafeningly loud... Her legs were clutched together now as strongly as elves' were, and she just couldn't help screaming from a pain she thought she would never experience...

"Take your time, darling," - I patted her on the shoulder and moved back to Kelly, who had by this time already more-or-less recovered from her pain and was now looking at me with even more fear. "There's one more thing unique to elves' reproductive system, and this time, girls, really unique," - standing behind her, I reached for her skirt and quickly found the zipper. One quick movement of the hand, and the skirt fell down to the floor. The elf was wearing cute white panties, sitting quite low on her hips and revealing a strip of bare skin between the bottom of her shirt and them... "Oh... Oh god, please, no..." - Kelly whispered in panic, when she felt my hand reach inside them. What a flawlessly soft skin... Either she shaves so well, or her hair hasn't started growing there yet, I've heard that it happens quite late for elves... Reaching for her labia, I quickly separated them and touched her clitoris, making her shiver a little bit and close her eyes. Everybody in the class were looking at us now, and it was too shameful for her to see these looks... Putting my other hand on her groin and pressing slightly, I began to slowly rub her weakest spot, almost immediately feeling that between her labia, her panties were becoming clearly wet... "Yes, this is exactly what I like about your race," - I whispered to her long ear, caressing her inside her panties, - "you sluts just can't resist it, even if your mind hates the one who's doing it..." Her pussy juice was leaving a noticeable wet spot on the front of her panties, and I literally could see her blush from shame, and at the same time I felt her belly shiver a little - she couldn't resist enjoying the feeling down there... She squeezed her thighs tightly, making it a bit harder for me to continue my job, but still it wasn't long until my rubbing of her clitoris and pressure on her groin took over, and Kelly let out a long moan of pleasure, and a powerful flow of her elf pussy juicy gushed out of her, soaking her panties completely... There was just too much of it, it started flowing down her shaking legs, dripping to the floor... Her hips were shaking wildly, and as soon as I let go of her, she limped on the rope, unable to stand on her feet and still leaking her juice...

Everybody was silent. The elves especially - I could see absolute fear in their eyes, I could see their closed legs, they were so afraid that each of them might be the next one... But the performance was already taking too long. Going back to the chair where I left my bag, I took a small knife out of it, and Valerie, the closest to me, cried a short "No!". "Well... Why no. I need to explain them why elves can gush like that and humans can't, right?" The black girl couldn't stop crying, when I quickly cut apart her skirt and then panties, leaving her completely naked, only wearing a bra, in front of her fellow classmates. Down there, at the very bottom of her belly, was a nice curvy bush of black hair... "So... Reproductive system, right?" - standing behind her, I placed the knife at her crotch and started to cut her up... Damn, her flesh was a bit harder than I thought. Her painfully loud scream almost killed the sound of her intestines falling out, when the blade of knife reached her navel and went even higher... Long sausages of guts spilled out, after some organs, all that accompanied by a liter, no less, of blood, right onto the floor in front of her... Her scream quickly went off, and in a few seconds she completely limped on a rope without a sign of life. After a few more seconds of silence, one of the girls in the classroom threw up on her desk... "Well, this is what was inside her," - I said quietly. You see her womb... Right there, I think," - I pointed at a bloody mess on the floor. - "But nothing special. Now, if we talk about elves..." - stepping over the pool of blood, I walked towards Kelly, and she shrieked in horror, looking at bloody knife in my hand.

I stood behind her and embraced, cutting up the completely wet panties and exposing her bare crotch to the audience. "Your death will be a little bit longer, so I want to give you an advice... Pain is slightly easier to bear if you don't hesitate screaming, okay?" - I kissed her on the cheek, placed the blade of knife a couple of inches below her navel and pressed slightly - just enough to cut through her skin and muscles and enter her insides... There was an awful sound when I started to cut away to her side and slightly higher, all that in complete silence, because Kelly, despite my advices, desperately tried not to cry, although I could see how she clutched her teeth so hard that they were going to break from this pain... "The good thing is, the organs I'm talking about are in front of her guts, so this time we won't have such a bloody mess falling out..." - I said slowly, finishing the cut in a manner that, applying some force, I could pull some of her skin and muscles away to show her organs... "Okay, so..." - throwing away the knife, I rolled up the sleeve of my shirt and carefully inserted three fingers into the cut, and this is where Kelly finally screamed so loud that hoarsed her throat within some seconds... Organs were packed tightly inside of her, but still I managed to find her womb and began pulling it out through the cut... Blood was already pouring out of it, and I was afraid she's going to die faster than I finish my lesson, but hopefully the pain shock will keep her conscious... "Here... It... Is!" - finally a triangle-shaped meat sack in my hands appeared through the cut, and the elf tried to scream even louder and higher, when I managed to pull it outside, leaving hanging on three meaty threads... "And now... Speaking of why you, elves, gush so much..." - I put my fingers inside the cut again, and this time it was much easier to pull out another organ, placed right under where her womb was. A white-ish sack filled with liquid... "This is where her juice is," - I had to almost shout this to audience, because Kelly's pathetic weeps were too loud. She was starting to lose her consciousness already from pain and blood loss, but I still had around half a minute. I squeezed her organ tightly in my hands, and her eyes opened wide, and she was almost seizing in pain, when the sack burst, spilling out a significant amount of her girlcum...

I stepped away from the dying elf, standing between my two victims and looking at girls. "Next time, when your teacher does a real lesson of anatomy for you, girls, don't forget to tell her that you already know all this and seen with your own eyes. Oh, and by the way, you know... I'll leave a knife here," - I pointed at my weapon lying on the floor. - "There's a camera, as you can see, and I'll check it from time to time. We're gonna fill all the rooms with gas soon, but if one of you will kill everybody else with this knife, she will be left alive. Okay?" - I took my bag from the teacher's desk and walked out of the classroom in complete silence, closing the door behind me. Not that I really wanted another companion, but who knows, maybe these girls actually can surprise me?..

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As for the next part... I'll try to do my best at writing it soon, but I can't promise if I will or won't have this writer's block again. Still, I'm pretty looking forward to any suggestions of unusual deaths that you have, because I'm running out of elaborate ways to kill someone and apparently stick more and more to a couple of my own fetishes, which isn't very good. Maybe it's partially because the school setting is somewhat limited, I can't do crazy stuff like getting hit by a car, etc.

Option A: As suggested earlier, we go back to Jane and Anna who find a red-haired 4-grader in the infirmary and do with her whatever you want them to do. Any suggestions on "activities" is more than welcome.

Option B: We continue with John, who discovers the room of central in the basement of the school, with the boilers. One of these boilers is big enough to store a schoolgirl... Torture and eventually death from boiling hot water is what option B offers for you. Again, any suggestions for some neat details are very welcome here as well.

Oh, and I also want your opinion about whether one of the girls in the class will really kill others in order to stay alive or not.
>> No. 5863 ID: 558fab
A...
>> No. 5867 ID: 1c3bab
I say option a, and I'd like them to fuck the four grader with a strap on before the torture starts, I'd like to see a little rape and rape dosn't seem to have as much impact if it's done after the torture has started. What I'd really like to see is john strangling someone while he's raping them so he can feel their death spasms around his cock, preferably a young virgin human
>> No. 5912 ID: 460d1e
I agree with 204 on all accounts. *Nods*
>> No. 5921 ID: 65f5d9
I say Rape, large insertion into ass, and drugs to mess with pain and pleasue receptors in her brain. (fear and passion are very close chemically in the brain)
>> No. 5942 ID: e667a9
No, no mind altering drugs, making them like it is great for messing with their mind yes, but that only works if you're going to let them live, I say stick with the pain and fear if you're gunna snuff the bitch
>> No. 6033 ID: e765c1
>>207

yes. i agree 100%
why should they get to enjoy it? they deserve to die. fuckin bitches
>> No. 6175 ID: d866b0
both a and b
>> No. 6522 ID: bf3555
Any chance of seeing another part some time soon? (Just in case, I'm voting for B.)
>> No. 6531 ID: 65f5d9
more
>> No. 6541 ID: f2ed80
why are there still no more postings? :[
>> No. 6552 ID: 606816
204 says more
>> No. 6555 ID: cf6746
they find a hidden compartment that has the nurse diary and a a large enema container of a white liquid.The diary basically shows that the school nurse was lesbian and had a thing for pregnant woman and young girls.so she had collected a large amount of semen and mixed a drug that causes rapid sexual maturation starting ovulation almost instantly and breast and curves grow soon after but at a slightly slower rate.also the more injected into the subjects womb the more she will ovulate and the faster and more intensely the body changes,also the more inject the more the girls sexual urges increase.

also if you/someone wants to add some more info on the nurse. or maybe to make another story from this.

she has been planing how to make her (wet) dreams a reality.she based most of her education to be a school nurse with high level of knowledge sexual maturation as well as to make the maturation drug.she had befriended a few girls of pre-puberty ages.she planed to get away with it by inviting them to go on a camping trip and stage a rape weather some or all the girls are aware of the plan or not is up to the writer.
>> No. 6685 ID: 65f5d9
more
>> No. 6729 ID: 18e0ec
B, but I'd like to see A happen later...
>> No. 7064 ID: 64bcc2
So is this story on indefinite hold, then? Shame, it was just getting good, too.
>> No. 7068 ID: 65f5d9
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