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I think it's probably better if the teachers are paid off, rather than trapped - it's cleaner, and meaner. Plus it gives the opportunity for one or more to have second thoughts and come back to try and save the day.

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Benji - I think you will be very happy with the next part...

Bitter - Thanks!

The next part should come up tomorrow night - I was aiming for tonight, but ran out of time.

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at first the killer / killers (I vote for 2 one male, one female) simply stalk and dispatch the oblivious students but eventually the teachers (armed with crowbars) break out and the real game begins. The few remaining students, told of the danger they are in by their teachers start actively hunting the hunters and it becomes a gory brutal game of cat and mouse between sall groups of the teachers and remaining students vs. the increasingly devious killers who have by now planted bombs and booby traps around the school

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The killers. The reason why I wanted a girl killer too is maybe a bit strange. :) Those who read the other thread I started, could have noticed that I'm a fan of nude-art (nude-art is, how to say, good quality erotic; not shitty glamour over-photoshopped Playboy thing, but not unprofessional photos on the other side. Studios like Met-Art, Femjoy, MPL if these names tell you something :); you can see that I was using some photos as "examples of how the girls could look like". And there's a model whom I adore much, you can call it being a fan. She's beautiful, and I can't imagine her being a victim. But then, she can be a killer. :) Here are a few pics:
http://s60.radikal.ru/i168/1007/96/0ddc4f07cb87.jpg and http://s07.radikal.ru/i180/1007/44/6e90902a6c66.jpg and http://i067.radikal.ru/1007/ed/fd444e203945.jpg - nude photos
http://s49.radikal.ru/i126/1007/fb/3a278b0fd031.jpg and http://s005.radikal.ru/i210/1007/cf/0f9aca3b2849.jpg - semi-clothed
http://s61.radikal.ru/i174/1007/3d/58de39becc12.jpg and http://s004.radikal.ru/i206/1007/bb/51ed3466ab2f.jpg - clothed

Generally, if talking about the presence of teachers... Well, my original idea was that the killer is someone rich, but not well-known, not a star or smth. Maybe he got his wealth from his parents. And he was obsessed with an idea of doing this massacre; he finds a person who shares his idea (this girl) and they decide to do it together. Actually I thought that teachers leave the school completely, because the thought of someone being in a room together with the killer and the victim, someone who's been paid to let it happen, isn't what I thought originally. The killers are, how to say, "intelligent killers", not just crazy butchers, they want to do the job clearly. But I'll think of your suggestions and how to incorporate it in the story, so never say never. :)

And about the showers - my thoughts exactly. ;)

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The killer could be one guy and a girl, but not necesarilly working toguether, sometimes it'd be one and sosmetimes the other. I propose the killers get help from some of the teachers (who should all be female if you ask me) such as the chemistry teacher in the lab, gym and/or fencing teacher in the gym, the nurse in the infirmary... Maybe the teachers themselves could be the victim at times, when the killer gets over eager.

As for places, I imagine the school has a kitchen, maybe the gym has javelins, weights, ropes... Maybe there's a small museum in the school (it's a big schol, right?), with old weapons and torture instruments. There's the labs too. There's the infirmary too. Maybe the killer can come in when the girls are in the showers in the gym so he can pick them while naked, much to the confused girls' shame.

]]> http://gurochan.net/lit/res/1554.html#1560 I vote for one guy + one girl, then, so when one gets into trouble he can call upon the other. But not in this case ;)

Some interesting places: gym storage room, band room (what can you do with instruments?), rooftop! Perfect place, sound proof.

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I hope we will soon see more parts of this story or in that world.

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What about the initial decisions?
- Only realistic girls (any nationalities etc.) or maybe elf girls too? Sort of a fantasy element in it (but I don't think elfs differ TOO much from human girls in this case :) - The killer. One guy? One guy + one girl (going to different parts of the school, not sticking together)? The last variant lets do some F/F stuff maybe. :)
- Just come up with interesting places in the school.

]]> http://gurochan.net/lit/res/1554.html#1557 Location: classroom A (smartest, best behaved class)
Girl name: Ivy
Nationality: Chinese-American
Description: 5'6", silky, medium length black hair, "very acceptable" breast size; she is elegant, smart, quite popular in class, and she attracts every boy in the neighborhood; She dresses very cleanly: skirt clean, shirt pressed, top button done and necktie tied neatly at the neck, however, she leaves the shirt fully untucked (while the rest of the class dresses more neatly), and for this the (male) killer takes her out of class to punish her (which confuses the class since they thought this is an emergency drill).
Death: The male killer wants to "teach her a lesson" to dress smart (but of course, just an excuse to kill her). The punishment is simple, no weapons. The killer will punch, kick, knee, and stomp on Ivy's belly until she heavily pukes blood till her death (since this is guro-chan, an inhuman amount of blood, and perhaps bits and pieces of her stomach, sounds good).

How does this sound? :)

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]]> http://gurochan.net/lit/res/1310.html#1555 http://gurochan.net/lit/res/1554.html - thread for the Highschool massacre story.
Here: continuing with the beach. :)

]]> http://gurochan.net/lit/res/1554.html http://gurochan.net/lit/res/1310.html . Of course I'm NOT forgetting about that thread, but as I suggested and people agreed, I'm also starting this one - so that I could run two stories simultaneously and double the fun.

Like in that thread, I'll be writing the story part-by-part based on YOUR choices. For example, "option A: the killer throws the girl into the pool and turns on electricity; option B: the killer drowns the girl in the pool" - then I wait for a few days for your votes, and the story continues based on the votes. "A few days" actually depends on how actively you will be voting. :)

THE PLOT:
A killer pays really big money to all the staff of the school so that they could let him do whatever he wants. It's a private girls-only highschool (I suppose, ages from 15 to 19); all the doors can shut automatically. The teachers tell the girls that today will be the drill ("fake emergency situation, to train pupils what they should do in such situations"), so that they don't panic when all this lockdown happens. The teachers leave the classrooms at a certain time under some innocuous guise, and the doors shut - to the girls in the classes it just looks like it happened accidentally. The killer then wanders around the school; he unlocks the door, picks the girl he likes, and lures her out of the class (he can say that he's a worker of the "emergency staff" and this is an evacuation etc., so that the other girls don't suspect anything). And then he kills her, and can go back for another victim, or visit some other place in the school. The school has a lot of interesting places - classrooms, gym (with cloakroom and showers), swimming pool, library, etc.

Let's DECIDE the following things:
- Only realistic girls (any nationalities etc.) or maybe elf girls too? Sort of a fantasy element in it (but I don't think elfs differ TOO much from human girls in this case :)
- The killer. One guy? One guy + one girl (going to different parts of the school, not sticking together)? The last variant lets do some F/F stuff maybe. :)
- Just come up with interesting places in the school.

After it's set up, I'll write the introduction ASAP.

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